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When I stare at the sky, sight fades, Stunning view blitheness, and people Hoist the tape to grasp strains and wades, When I stare at the sky, sight fades. Now butterfly is apt for raids. How do they live? I sigh with lull, When I stare at the sky, sight fades Stunning view blitheness, and people.
Written: January 23, 2022 Triolet Poetry Contest 160 Words or Less Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 1/24/2022 5:25:00 AM
Earth and sky and their beautiful sights flitting before the eyes, giving great elation... ! A lovely triolet
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Date: 1/24/2022 1:49:00 AM
A lovely triolet. Isi t for the contest?
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Date: 1/23/2022 3:06:00 PM
This is beautiful Lasaad and makes me yearn for Spring. Butterflies are one of my favorite things and the picture here is beautiful. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/23/2022 1:45:00 PM
Much comfort in nature--enjoyed your words questing elation.
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Date: 1/23/2022 1:24:00 PM
Lovely triolet with a splendid illustration!
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