Thoughts of a Survivor

I haven't turned ninenteen yet,
and in this white-linen hospital bed...
that horrible scene of the car crash
keeps on flashing back and makes me sweat.


I could have died, but so grateful to be alive and out of danger,
breathing air despite the acute pain I endure,
my mom keeps watch and praying she awaits a miracle...
even doctors firmly believe that's not impossible. 


Will I be able to walk pain-free and think clearly as before within a year?
That still remains to be seen, but I trust as mother
in the power of prayers...and believing in a God
who always keeps His promise by proclaiming Himself an awesome Lord. 



The tremendous support I get from all makes me stronger in my fight.    
and they bring me get-well cards and lots of flowers and teddy bears,
I stare at them and they comfort me when I look back and shed tears...
two weeks ago I felt invincible, now this tragedy has changed all that.


Will I ever forget what happened on that narrow, dim-lit street...
when I lost consciousness and fell into a deep sleep?
Ambulances and firetrucks wailed, but nothing I heard...
I could have died and not have been a witness to the story I've told!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 7:21 PM
My prayers will be with her till she recovers, Andrew
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Congrats on the win, Andrew
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 9:29 PM
Andrew, Prayers and healing thoughts are on the way for your niece. Congratulatoins on your win. Blessings, Connie
Guzzi Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 5:28 PM
We need a co-ordinated list so many in need of prayer. If you can, touch, is very helpful in these situations calming, even if its just brushing her hair, or rubbing her hands or feet. I was in a cast once for 6 month 3 in a thigh cast & I know! (shiver) Light & Love always
Taylor Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Congrats, Andrew. What a great write. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your poetry winning in Paula Swanson's contest "Poetry For Poetry's Sake". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:26 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
Sweetheart Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in Paula's contest with this rare beauty.. enjoyed my friend as always...with luv..ciao..
Devonshire Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrew! So glad to see this in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 8:16 PM
Congrats on the win, Andrew
Devonshire Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 8:40 AM
If this happened to you, Andrew, it must have been a life-changing experience. When we feel we are on the verge of death, we are often drawn closer to God. Excellent poem. Send some prayers my way today for the doctor visit, dear friend. I've been praying a lot too! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 7:52 AM
very well written poem
Mehta Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 3:21 AM
I nice descriptive write on what happened in that narrow, dim-lit street, Andrew
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