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A calm fell over me as I arose from my birth, A hush falls over the Earth, As if God had, once more given birth to a new Universe. I looked up and thought I saw, His bright smile reflected in the sun, His angels were all dancing in glee, Smiling and singing for you and for me. I felt His Presence, oh! so near, As if He was saying, "Oh my dears, I love you so much I had to make, New worlds for you to take". And I thought, as His new day greeted me, "What a kind and loving Father is He, He greets us with a new World made from above, and all He wants in return, is our Love."

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Date: 8/16/2009 9:38:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. You are a great friend. Adeleke
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/11/2009 3:52:00 AM
a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/10/2009 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully written sentiment reflecting your belief, Patricia. Congratulations on your writing being selected this week here at PoetrySoup!!
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:42:00 AM
Patricia - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ
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Date: 8/10/2009 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Patricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured, Patricia. This is a beautiful spiritual poem and tribute to God. Keep writing! DAS-J
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Date: 8/9/2009 1:13:00 PM
Blessings to you for sharing this uplifting view with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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