Thoughts

My thoughts begin to spin this night.
They swirl like fireflies or soar like birds, 
whirling into a sky feathery white - 
then lyrical, they flutter down as words.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 3:39 PM
Wonderfully creative! Congratulations
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 9:19 AM
So that's (at least partly) how your poetically-creative process works!! ;) This is a lovely quatrain, Andrea, and congratulations on your HM! Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
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December 24, 2025 at 4:34 PM
outstanding 'fluttering' of words...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Oh so lovely! I can close my eyes and see such sights.
Gauthier Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Sweet ~ fun to be in the writing mood
Hind Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 9:30 PM
Great muse!!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 7:05 AM
What a fun write you have here. Love this one... Great Ending... They sure do... Have a Very Blessed Christmas and New Year 2026......................
DiMino Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 6:22 AM
Delightful your fluttering words. Such a joy to create. Well said.
Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 3:31 AM
Ahhh!! I like this one, Andrea. Thank you for sharing this creative one with us. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 2:50 AM
A jewel of a poem, Andrea. Superb flow between lines, word choice and atmosphere portrayal. Thanks for your assessment of Intriguing Summit Watch Part 2 and that sound advice of yours leading up to it Howard
Alhemaidy Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Bravo!
Godwin Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 12:25 PM
This took my breath away, it is gorgeous. I want to fav it but that could blow things for you if it's for a contest?????
Theraven Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Hello Andrea, Such a wonderful way to rise above and find clarity in a foggy world. Season's best to you and all of your family. -Richard
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