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Thoughts

Like bolts of lightning I’ve
felt the words from my fingers
come forth

My heart,
my brain, sparking thoughts

Out of them I dust the books of
love with words

I fantasize with paper
and pen,
I cross fiords and skies,
I cry out loud from the high
rocks of the sea,
the bolts riddle,
they rhyme the words,
and charm the hearts,
suspiciously 
they uncover my thoughts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/18/2015 11:17:00 PM
I love this little write , Bev :)
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Bev Smith
Date: 2/24/2015 8:09:00 PM
What a shame to have lost those writes , obviously she was quite passionate .... lol . Do enjoy your eccentric-ness ;) Bev
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James Peranteau
Date: 2/24/2015 7:44:00 PM
ooops...2009
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James Peranteau
Date: 2/24/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thank you kindly dear poet ! A lil' thought....this write is the only write that I saved before I joined the Soup 3/3009. I wrote almost 1600 writes from 1969(I was 11)(I won second place in a sixth grade poetry competition)until 1983<---my sons mother threw them out in the trash when she was angry with me, she didn't tell me for over a week...eeeek ! And then mine writes from 1985 through 2007('cept'n "Thoughts") I disgarded. James<---ecentric ? I duno......Anywho, thanx for you read Bv, I'm head in your direction soon !.....Have a wonderf week.....much love, james
Date: 11/16/2010 7:01:00 PM
Another one i reallly like. WEll, James, I guess I will stop here for now. My back is killing me, but I do enjoy finding poets who do not write super long poems becuase I can go thru them fast making many comments! Luv, Andrea Ps I see a comment down here about making it to first round. Was this one that you entered last year then?
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Date: 9/25/2009 7:56:00 AM
Congrats to you James! I remember this awesome write. Good luck in the finals! Hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round James.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:26:00 PM
Dear James, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:28:00 AM
Well done, best wishes in the next rounds James.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/11/2009 8:33:00 AM
Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:15:00 AM
Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you james!
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:03:00 AM
James, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/6/2009 3:03:00 PM
An excellent expression of a poet's true nature! Congratulations on this great poem among the featured works this week!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/6/2009 12:11:00 PM
Well expressed Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 7/6/2009 10:42:00 AM
aww so beautiful brigns your writing come alive, congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/6/2009 10:42:00 AM
this piece adds that extra spark God bless you
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Date: 7/6/2009 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week James. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:31:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. More power and success. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 5/16/2009 4:21:00 PM
Wow, this is quite powerful. I am jealous as I have been experiencing quite the writers block lately. Love your creativity here resulting in one amazing write! And wow, what an awesome comment on my latest poem, I thank you so kindly. Made me feel great! Warmest wishes. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/25/2009 6:21:00 PM
Such a creative recipe for creating great poetry, James! Careful now, you're revealing your secrets. (Now if I could just find some high rocks of the sea to help me on my way...) Very clever! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2009 7:02:00 AM
Beautiful indeed.
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