Thoughts

This invisible being has come 
alive inside my mind
She roams freely
thoughts and me entwined
Tossing and turning 
she puts me into a bind
Looking for things that she can find
I’ll give her this, she’s behind 
my poetry, this mastermind
She refuses to lift a finger
And often springs to mind
And at times she’s certainly not too kind
She has feelings which she often ties
around my neck like a noose
And takes offence, if I don’t think
And sulks when I refuse
I dare not falter, she has a short fuse!

6.6.2021
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann
Contest: The poet’s hands are tied
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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 3:45 PM
Hello Carol Mitra, it sounds like a battle to do what is right to do. enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Hello Carol Mitra, I hop all is well. enjoy your day my friend.
Mitra Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:29 PM
Thanks dear Darlene....much love :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Fascinating, delightful piece, Carol:-) I'm sure it will do pretty well in Kai's contest!
Mitra Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:28 PM
Thank you dear Edward....I hope so too :)
Pathak Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 12:03 AM
A thoughtful verse on thoughts that has a solid narrative
Mitra Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 1:16 AM
Thank you Aniruddha....I am glad you thought so :)
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