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first things first, exhume the ‘I’ ~ that soul may then wingless fly

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2025 7:53:00 PM

Precisely. ~ The Mosquito

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/5/2025 11:00:00 PM

Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 6/4/2025 7:41:00 PM

Ok Unseeking seeker my friend. nice Couplet, I quite don't get it thank u bcoz as u know English is my 2nd language and I didn't finish school. I remembered u check my previous poem and I sugget u check my recent one's. I'm not perfect but I thik I know enough to help someone know poetry. I accept Constructive Criticism so if u have one for me I thank u for doing so. ~Jac

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/5/2025 7:53:00 PM

Seeker, you are a gentleman and a scholar. ~ Gershon

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2025 10:29:00 PM

No one is perfect, Jac. All words are distorted because the canvas is contorted.