Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Thought is the thief

Thought is the thief, opaquing light
ever aglow in heart,
so in silence garner clear sight,
by adding love to cart.

Present in witness mode,
heart centre our abode,
let’s pay to God an ode.

Turn a new leaf ~
Thought is the thief

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Reason A. Poteet March 17, 2026 at 9:24 AM THanks for the example, UnSeeking, Nice, New forms can be addictive indeed. Love to try different forms. Thought is where words and deeds originate. When thoughts are based on love, genuine agape love, miracles occur. A nice read indeed. Unseeking Seeker March 17, 2026 at 10:34 PM Thank you, Poteet :)

Anisha Dutta March 11, 2026 at 7:55 AM This form seems very nice to me. Trying your Contest. Have Good Days Unseeking Seeker March 11, 2026 at 1:13 PM Great! Give it a shot!

CayCay Godwin March 9, 2026 at 2:37 AM This is beautiful. I haven't entered your contests for a bit now, but this form challenge might change that. These are mighty fine words to inhale, and I'm blessed you composed them. Unseeking Seeker March 9, 2026 at 1:11 PM Thank you, CayCay ~ hope you enjoy penning a poem in the Quietus form

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2026 at 6:18 PM A very cool poetry form. I kind of remember it. Thanks for this lovely example in your contest. Unseeking Seeker February 18, 2026 at 9:53 PM Thanks Andrea. I hope this contest arouses some interest in this form

Valsa George February 17, 2026 at 8:00 PM Beautiful image and thoughts, dear Seeker friend. You are a master in the quitetus form. Unseeking Seeker February 17, 2026 at 8:03 PM Thank you, Valsa dear.

I Am Anaya February 2, 2026 at 7:54 PM Super cute, adding love to cart, reminded me of Amazon . Wonderderful picture. Unseeking Seeker February 2, 2026 at 8:08 PM Thank you, Anaya. In my view, entering silence is the key to spiritual progress. Love is a great tool, since when we are in a loving state, thoughts cannot exist, in absence of which, ego dies and then we see our true Self.

Unseeking Seeker February 2, 2026 at 7:34 PM Poetry form ~ Quietus