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Thou True Love of Mine

Thy name is conjured on the breeze.
And thou hast brought me to my knees.

Thou loveth me with all thy soul.
I beseech thee maketh me whole.

Whither thou goest I shall be.
Forever lost upon thy sea.

Thou hast designed my fate"tis true.
Henceforth we shall be one not two.

My arms doth ache to holdeth thee near.
Eternally I shalt loveth thee dear.



for Old English Valentine contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2013 6:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win..enjoyed. BG
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:06:00 PM
Very romantic. BIG congrats!!
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Date: 2/22/2013 2:04:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2013 7:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Connie
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:48:00 AM
Hi belated congratulations, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:45:00 PM
Congrats Deb ....Seren
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:57:00 PM
Beautiful..congratulations...
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:15:00 PM
Hi Deb, once again, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2013 4:44:00 PM
To read this beauty......should bring him also to his knees.......(with a proposal!)...Beautiful!!
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Date: 2/21/2013 12:01:00 PM
Love this...Thou hast written a lovely valentine... Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 1/26/2013 3:59:00 PM
A beautiful poem to be put in a card. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 1/24/2013 11:20:00 PM
Great one Deb ...Seren
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Date: 1/24/2013 10:02:00 PM
Wow, this is a perfect entry in the Valentine contest my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and sentimental poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!
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