Thou True Love of Mine

Thy name is conjured on the breeze.
And thou hast brought me to my knees.

Thou loveth me with all thy soul.
I beseech thee maketh me whole.

Whither thou goest I shall be.
Forever lost upon thy sea.

Thou hast designed my fate"tis true.
Henceforth we shall be one not two.

My arms doth ache to holdeth thee near.
Eternally I shalt loveth thee dear.



for Old English Valentine contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gorelick Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Congrats on your win..enjoyed. BG
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Very romantic. BIG congrats!!
Guzzi Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:48 AM
Hi belated congratulations, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
Roberts Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Congrats Deb ....Seren
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Beautiful..congratulations...
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Hi Deb, once again, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 4:44 PM
To read this beauty......should bring him also to his knees.......(with a proposal!)...Beautiful!!
Squyres Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Love this...Thou hast written a lovely valentine... Congrats on your win !!
Carrillo Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 3:59 PM
A beautiful poem to be put in a card. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings. Lucilla
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:20 PM
Great one Deb ...Seren
Sivey Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 10:02 PM
Wow, this is a perfect entry in the Valentine contest my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and sentimental poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!
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