Thou Shalt Always Be My Love

               
In this coursing, crimson river 
of my blood, you float. 
There is no end to this, our eternal
amorousness.
Nay, not even human death can 
remove us from Eros's moat.
Nor our touching hands' total
peacefulness.
So let's on, to the minutes as
they, like arrows, swiftly pass. 
Your mistress awaits you in cobalt, 
lace blue, summer gown!
Upon the kiss of morning dew on 
this orb's verdant grass!
Let us do partake of vintage wines,
glorious breads and cheese till
God's sundown.
Let us dream of the children we
will create!
And weep tears of joy and blessed 
happiness.
We revel in each second, so
divinely, and magically intimate.
To share with all humanity our 
immutable, loves' holiness!

July 13, 2019
Sonnet One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/22/2019 6:44:00 AM
I really enjoyed your Amazing sonnett, Panagiota.. So inspirational and glorious!! This is a fav for me!! Have a blessed day!!
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Date: 7/22/2019 9:56:00 AM
Greetings Robertina. I needed to see your comment. Sometimes I think I am the worst poet here. You have done my heart well. I will check out your poems.))), you already blessed this day with sunshine. Thank you. With hugs, Panagiot
Date: 7/17/2019 6:43:00 AM
Love is holy, for sure! Bravo! Gorgeous write.
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Date: 7/17/2019 10:29:00 AM
Aporeciate all the time you take commenting. You are not a Drive By Commentor...))) You give it your all. What a heart you have! Amazinggggg! PR
Date: 7/14/2019 7:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful love poem, Panagiota. So sorry I didn't comment sooner I was on vacation. Your first sonnet reads like a winner. Absolutely wonderful! Hugs always my dear friend :)
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Date: 7/14/2019 9:22:00 PM
Charles..good you went on vacation. Was far from a simple write. I like the old sonnet form. Am awre there are easier ways to do this. Thank your Charles Panagiota xx
Date: 7/14/2019 10:28:00 AM
Panagiota, I like this poem. I also enjoyed your poem Bluebird this morning. I hope this day is good to you as we revel in 'Thou Shalt Always Be My Love'. -Richard
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Date: 7/14/2019 10:35:00 AM
Richard, you just made me extremely happy, do you know that? Bluebirds and love coming your way, indeed! Panagiota xoxo
Date: 7/13/2019 10:19:00 PM
Ain't love grand. Powerful piece my friend. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/14/2019 12:09:00 AM
David, my friend, sorry did not reply sooner. Yes. Love is all there is. Of God, life, and fellow humans. Was so horribly hot here today, i slept most of the day, was up till 2am wrestling with this Sonnet. I am such a lover of the Bard! But am not the Bard Panagiota
Date: 7/13/2019 9:25:00 AM
There is no inoculation for the love bug. Once in your blood you become it’s slave. I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 7/13/2019 9:38:00 AM
Oh, how totally true about enslavement. And a blessed enslavement it is. Glad you enjoyed, Richard! Panagiota
Date: 7/13/2019 5:27:00 AM
Your verses sing to this old poet's romantic heart! This is poetry with romantic depth, immense beauty and a sincere message of love, fidelity and true honor! Much in the classic style of the golden poets of old... A beauty, a shining gem and a truly pleasurable read.. A fav...
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Date: 7/13/2019 7:48:00 AM
So honored by your critique and comments, Robert. Yes, it is like classics of old.. A great fan of The Bard's sonnets. I want my poems to have depth and me in them. Glad you heard the music! Be very blessed and well. Panagiota xx
Date: 7/13/2019 3:18:00 AM
Panagiota, I just adore. I'm coveting - fav.
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Date: 7/13/2019 6:25:00 AM
Greetings Georgia! Love your comment. I can write sonnets but rarely can pen a haiku or any ku! Love Skakespeare 's sonnets most. Panagiota -)) thank you,
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