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Those Were the Days

Gone are the days when every man and woman was royalty Spirited away when the slave catchers came Fled are the nights when every child dreamed of being called a prophetess or priest Washed away when the long ships crashed upon the reef The corrupt council and judges hid in the rainforest that day When they sold us out to be slaves It seems those days ain’t changed since; Judas faces put on cloth by silkscreen print, splashed on canvas by painter’s ink And I wonder ... what would my ancestors think? Asking myself why ... this scattered people possess no common aim or purpose Bemoan, I cry ... seeing the children wander idly And I ponder ... what do they dream to be?

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Date: 8/9/2017 1:53:00 PM
yes what do children dream to be.That is the question. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/5/2017 1:16:00 AM
Very deep Freddie. I am fleeing everything you say, esp. children, wandering idly. I really like the "scattered people line too. Great write. A fave.
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Date: 7/23/2017 7:29:00 AM
A different age and time, different circumstances, but the corrupt have always been there lurking behind the scenes. The young need attention and 'nourishment', otherwise it's so easy for their dreams to fade into oblivion. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/21/2017 6:22:00 PM
I hope they dream of being great Freddie, and that they never stop dreaming
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Date: 7/21/2017 4:37:00 PM
Well written my friend, some days never come back as traditions become lost..
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Date: 7/21/2017 1:46:00 PM
Great imagery; love this line: "Judas faces put on cloth by silkscreen print, splashed on canvas by painter’s ink And I wonder ... what would my ancestors think?".
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Date: 7/21/2017 9:48:00 AM
I hope they dream meaningful dreams and that their dreams become reality. A tremendous piece Freddie.
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