Those Successful

Those Successful


No comment upon the richness of science
It glamoured lives offering meagre chance
A class of successful notes 
Further tyranny from unwanted games.


May be in the form of war or peace 
A nudity of success hitting the target
May be it would form from the nozzle of gun
Or the big books of philosophers


Always I found clapped hands to admire both
May be to drop the bombs or to send for charity
Confusing all the time I have walked through
The streets of square raising fresh news 
Kidnaps and rapes in the freedom of survive


How can I show my sigh to other
While I nod head down all the time failure
These days even in dreams,those successful failures
A kind of win in brain while emerges 
Scattering hopes in the morning sun


Parching and horrid dirty sweats flow
Finding the path of temple
Soaking my old cheeks from both sides
To fumble those successful notes

Whether, is it the stagnant step of human being
Only dropping down to get the peace path
Or raising dews of morning vapour
Could provide them those successful notes

Saints in the world debate bring reality in breath
Miracle of humans think the pages are errors
All are right and true if they play game
According to norms set before hand
To give pleasure to demonstrators
Those successful all are who abide by rules.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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