Those Poems, That Fire

Those Poems, That Fire

I stood in the alley, still
in pajamas, somebody’s shoes,
another man’s coat, my eyes
on the bronc of the hoses.
Squawed in the blankets of neighbors, 
my wife and three children sipped
chocolate, stood orange and still.
Of the hundred or more I had stored 
in a drawer, I could remember,
comma for comma, no more than four,
none of them final,
all of them fetal.

Donal Mahoney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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