Those Loving Eyes (A Collaboration/Simone Segal)

T ime seems to stand still when looking deeply into your eyes
H ypnotizing me at will, taking me to paradise
O ceans of deep blue, riding the waves of your irises
S o stuck on you like the most contagious of viruses!
E xcitedly, I'm under your control, staring deeply into your soul
 
L ost in a whrilpool of your entire being
O nly you my love, my eyes are seeing
V isions of your beauty, sends me floating above
I ntoxicated I swim in your ocean of love
N avagating a journey so your heart will transpire
G iving my all, to fulfill your every desire
 
E levated I'm flying like a bird, watch me soar
Y our eyes of pure love, I completely adore
E scape with me for eternity to paradise
S howing me the way with those loving eyes!

*A collaboration with Simone Segal-I wrote the Ist stanza, she, the 2nd and we both did the last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/15/2010 3:24:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Jimmy and Simone, pure dreamy poetry >> James
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Date: 4/22/2010 2:52:00 PM
Very Beautiful Jimmy..Well done...both of you...Charma
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Date: 4/22/2010 9:39:00 AM
very nice enjoyed it and thanks for your kind comments faleshia
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:45:00 PM
A great collaboration.....lovely poem, from great team work!! Nicely done, Jimmy and Simone!
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Date: 4/21/2010 1:29:00 PM
Hey Jimmy, thank you, I enjoyed writing with you,it was a pleasure! love Simone
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Date: 4/21/2010 12:00:00 PM
Which poem is the collaboration title? luv "Sweetheart"
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