Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

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Those Lips, That Smile

Oh, me, that smile
it shines a mile
those lips so sultry sweet
that mane of hair
so rich and slick
disheveled, still a treat!

Your eyes of blue
oh, what a hue
a glacier full of fire
those teeth that flash
a pearly white
a dream wrapped in desire

Your voice....the silk
the velvet plush
of luxury divine
the way it trembles 
on each note
what it does, I can't define

the way you move
the way you shake
the way the rhythm flows
I move, I groove 
my body melts
a rush that glows and glows

My answer'd be
to question asked
"Tell me dear,
are you lonesome tonight?"
"No, I am not
You're not forgot
These thoughts still bring delight."

Eileen Manassian!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_GanoEE7VUc

Elvis at his finest! OH!!!

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CayCay Godwin December 8, 2015 at 11:02 AM Reading you today reminds me of how difficult it is to read everyone and everything rewarding; so little time, so much talent. I try and will continue to try discovering and commenting on all the talent to be found on PS. This is a wonderful write, I love the flow, the rhyme, the content and MUST read more, my emotions and joy level require it! CayCay

Pandita Sietesantos November 20, 2015 at 10:33 AM Beautiful tribute to the King of Pop! I am still a fan! Thank you for sharing this gem! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita

Casarah Nance November 16, 2015 at 5:53 PM Phew he sure is f-i-n-e fine.. smooth as silk lines and an even smoother subject...:-) big smiles

Paul Callus November 12, 2015 at 3:14 PM Ahhh and even the men loved him! Great showman and singer (I loved the voice). We (especially my sister) knew most of his songs by heart. No, dear, it's not fair that anyone should suffer the ordeal of lonesome nights! Hugs // paul

Charmaine Chircop November 12, 2015 at 12:53 AM Oh Elvis ,So handsome ,and what an icon,what a voice.He had the full package..Lovelyvtribute to the king.

Emile Pinet November 11, 2015 at 10:53 AM I'd like to think that Elvis is blowing you a kiss form the great beyond, for you're surely one of his biggest fans. Well written. Emile.

Arthur Vaso November 11, 2015 at 10:49 AM Now where ever did you find that video of me? Loved the poem. When I saw the video, I laughed when I see the 2 women give each other the evil eye, I said wow, there is a second poem there for sure!!! Hugs!!

Robert Lindley November 10, 2015 at 10:16 PM You my friend have crafted an excellent , smooth flowing piece with this one. I am still working on my entry to that contest. I always try to put extra into certain contests that inspire my older muse..lol Eileen Manassian November 10, 2015 at 10:19 PM Is there a contest going on this? I'm not aware of it. Someone send me a youtube link to one of his songs, and I was reminded how much I like him....and this was the result. I don't know of any contest. Please enlighten me, dear. Thanks

Elis Artis November 9, 2015 at 8:47 AM So creative and well-penned:) +7 Eileen Manassian November 9, 2015 at 9:28 AM Thank you, Elis. Appreciate the visit .

Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2015 at 8:40 AM Hi Eileen. Hugs Rick. Eileen Manassian November 9, 2015 at 9:29 AM Hi, Rick. Anything new up, dear. I will check now. Hugs

Theresa Cw November 9, 2015 at 2:26 AM I also agree with everything Silent One has said and even more.... hugs Theresa Eileen Manassian November 9, 2015 at 9:32 AM Thank you, Theresa.....So sweet of you to visit and comment....

Richard Lamoureux November 8, 2015 at 1:50 PM I love the Elvis reference, it adds a bit of nostalgia to the piece. A woman like you should neve be lonely! Eileen Manassian November 9, 2015 at 9:33 AM Thanks, dear Rick. Your last sentence is a treasure. Hugs

Kim Merryman November 8, 2015 at 11:04 AM Your poem flows effortlessly off the tongue! A fantastic write, Eileen! Love, Kim Eileen Manassian November 9, 2015 at 9:34 AM Thanks, sweet Kim. You are an encouragement. This is a bit of a fun write. Hugs

Constance La France November 8, 2015 at 8:37 AM Eileen, I have seen documentaries on Elvis and you captured the essence of him at his best, seems his life was difficult, I think his songs are amazing and so is your poem, amazing 7 Eileen Manassian November 9, 2015 at 9:34 AM Yes, he did live a troubled life. Fame can do that to anyone, I guess. He has recorded gospel music...which has his signature touch. Thanks for the visit, dear.

Laura Breidenthal November 8, 2015 at 5:23 AM Lovely dedication to the sexy, charming Elvis! An excellent entertainer. : ) Love his quote about rhythm..Always, Laura Eileen Manassian November 9, 2015 at 9:35 AM Yes, my dear. Elvis was a legend. The link I shared is him at his shaking gyrating best. :) Thanks for the visit.