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Those Dancing Leaves

The chill of early autumn casts A kaleidoscope of color upon A plethora of dangling leaves As they shimmy and shake about Mother Nature’s frosty breath Hastens their departure from their lofty heights The brassy winds of autumn will be here soon Bursting forth with an exuberant breathy gusto Prompting the leaves to whirl and spin around Dancing merrily along the ground Reminds this creaky old observer Of a gleeful group of school girls Swirling in their colorful gowns Happily frolicking and jumping about Joyfully doing their happy dance

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Date: 10/30/2013 12:18:00 PM
love the win Donald, ....love <3 SKAT
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 10/30/2013 4:53:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/28/2013 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Donald
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 10/30/2013 4:53:00 PM
Thank you sir
Date: 10/27/2013 1:25:00 AM
This is a nice poem friend,Congratulation on your win
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 10/28/2013 10:17:00 PM
Thank you sir.
Date: 10/26/2013 9:20:00 PM
Donald, , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/13/2013 8:12:00 AM
I felt like I was out for a chilly afternoon walk in a garden. I can smell the scent of the leaves as they're being crushed by my bare feet and I can hear the crunch w/c is kind of similar to waves pounding on the shore. :) Lovely~
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Date: 10/9/2013 2:01:00 PM
Hey Donald... Nice of you to stop by. I'm glad you enjoyed my song. :o) I like what you have written here. The wording is excellent! The way you brought the two together with dancing & spinning shimming & shaking about. Very nice! I'll look forward to hearing from you again my friend.
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:27:00 PM
This made me smile..a beautiful description of the girls....small typo 3rd line. BG
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