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Thomas Nate Turner

Thomas Nate Turner only knew gloom For "TNT" there was not much room If one mistake He was to make Then he just might fall down and go BOOM!

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/4/2018 2:08:00 PM

OH - I feel like the lightbulb (finally) came on - "TNT" - good job!

Pat Adams
Date: 6/4/2018 4:42:00 PM

That's funny! I thought about putting the periods after each initial but to me, in a way, the discovery is part of the fun!!...................or not, I don't know..........but thanks for commenting my friend......................pat

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2018 5:40:00 PM

very clever word play Pat, an explosive write:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 6/2/2018 3:39:00 PM

Thank you my friend. You are one of the first people I met on the soup and I treasure your opinion!..........80)......pat