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This Year

THIS YEAR What folly of the dreamer half asleep – full sated to become prophetic schemer of a future yet undated ingesting meals yet to be plated. How daft the followers in kind mewing in his shadow feeding from his empty mind on bones devoid of marrow adrift in fantasy’s tomorrow. Thus as the season’s shadows fade, as age creeps ever closer near, how much of living will we trade for empty dreams no longer clear slow tarnished in the passing year. 1/2/2015 submitted to This Year in English Quintain – Poetry Contest sponsor – Francine Roberts

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Date: 2/20/2015 10:59:00 PM
this one is sure deep. I could say I know what it's about but I will feel silly if I am wrong. Congrats, John. It's a great poem.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2015 9:08:00 AM
Well, Andrea, It meant what it meant to me when I wrote it and it means what it means to you when you read it. There will be no quiz as often the "muse" isn't sure what it means when he writes it. It could make for a nice discussion.
Date: 2/18/2015 10:28:00 PM
John, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thanks again Skat for your continued support.
Date: 2/17/2015 5:28:00 PM
Well done, John. A favorite of mine. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/17/2015 6:31:00 AM
Certainly food for thought John! - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2015 9:05:00 AM
Jan, I take that as a high compliment as I believe poetry should engender thought on the part of the reader.
Date: 2/16/2015 8:55:00 PM
boldly penned, congrats on your win in the contest
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2015 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Francine always good to hear from you.

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