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This World We Live In

This world we live in, is like a galaxy of its own So big and ambiguous, I'm frequently alone. Intrigue and mystery are things of the past Thoughts of the future leave me truly aghast. It's dog eats dog, each man for his own Overlooking eachother whilst envisioning a throne. Love and Affection are buried side by side And reigning the earth are Mr Greed and Conceit- his bride. Family values are slowly dissolving like snow Commandment number 5 has reached an all time low. Masks of benevolence are used to disguise intent With only one motivation- to individually ascent. Belief is illogical, magic no longer exists For if it is unexplained, it is not on the list. I tremble at the thought of replacing love for goods It makes no sense to trade diamonds for wood. My question to ask is when will this stop? Will we lose control and fall from the top? Will we self destruct and regret it all? After all, the higher you climb the longer you fall. As a humble proletarian, an answer I do not have The answer you are seeking, cannot be found in a lab. In such a predicament, creativity reigns supreme Mere generosity and selflessness are not quite the theme. For the answer, you will have to look deep in your heart In a realm where logic and intellect do not play a part. You must fear the future, you must appreciate the past It all starts with the present, your contribution is vast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/5/2016 3:05:00 PM
you should post again. LINDA
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Alexander.
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:46:00 AM
You've penned a very thoughtful piece of poetry, a piece that talks to our very humanity, but you entered it into a contest that is asking for Haibun poems. This is no Haibun, let alone a Haibun FreeStyle; a form that I am hoping to create. If you try the Haibun form again, and I suggest that you do, for it is freedom in itself, please let me know.
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:07:00 PM
Hi Alexander, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:31:00 PM
Hi Alexander, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:27:00 PM
Alexander, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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