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This Was It

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I stood up to the plate there was no way I wouldn’t give my all I knew I would be tested with everything I had there would be no makeover, no redo this was it, the show stopper the call for the performance of a lifetime the final scene of the last act be brave, it was now or never it had finally all led to this as loud as loud could be I heard it in the silence of forevers ‘come on, give us all you’ve got’ and so it was I took my husband home the hospital said the end was near it was the final curtain call his mind was tainted, not all there thankful the end hadn’t come more abruptly make every moment count is what I heard so it was I would prepare my love much like for a formal wedding ceremony for the moment I’d walk him through the garden down that aisle right up to heaven’s gate AP: 1st place 2022, 2nd place 2022 Submitted on May 17, 2022 for contest THE GREATEST PERFORMANCE OF MY LIFE sponsored by JCB BRUL - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 7/15/2022 1:47:00 AM
Heart wrenching! God is watching. Congrats on your win, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/15/2022 10:22:00 PM
Thank you very much ~
Date: 7/14/2022 4:11:00 PM
It's good when we can have a chance to say goodbye. I love your last stanza especially.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/15/2022 10:22:00 PM
Yes. So much to be thankful for.
Date: 7/13/2022 6:03:00 AM
Sweet thoughts, Llne.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/14/2022 4:05:00 AM
Thank you so much ~
Date: 5/21/2022 5:23:00 PM
Your words, your oration, and your brave heart to face your husbands “final curtain call”~ a tragedy you carried out with a dignified “performance”. I am moved to tears. Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/14/2022 4:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paulette ~
Date: 5/17/2022 6:53:00 PM
Nicely written and beautifully orated. Take care and God bless you and those you adore.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/18/2022 9:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Valerie ~
Date: 5/17/2022 3:12:00 PM
wow, just superb
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2022 6:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeff. Most appreciated ~

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