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This Vagrant Lust

Hell's music taunts his hooded lie Condemns his fingers fretful glee This vagrant lust that will not die Nor feed his longing to be free Cold tremor of long deadened strings Hell's music taunts his hooded lie Refutes the truths to which he clings His voice an empty, faded sigh Cold wind - a graveyard's soulless cry Vibrations of death's haunting hum Hell's music taunts his hooded lie As through the flames bone fingers strum Hell's flame his now forever curse His music it would never die Decisions based on fame and purse Hell's music taunts his hooded lie 1/22/2020

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Date: 2/16/2020 2:19:00 PM
Terrifying thoughts on paradise lost, John. This is the place we all hope to avoid. Compelling write! Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 2/16/2020 5:44:00 AM
This vagrant lust that will not die.. Nor feed his longing to be free.. Majestic lines.. Great win John..
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Date: 2/15/2020 12:59:00 PM
Bravo, John. Awesome poem. Congrats on your well earned top win.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/15/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Line, appreciate you stopping to read and comment
Date: 2/15/2020 8:22:00 AM
Great write John, Congrats on your win
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John Lawless
Date: 2/15/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for the very interesting visual theme
Date: 1/22/2020 2:25:00 PM
very thought-provoking indeed
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John Lawless
Date: 1/25/2020 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Jacka, appreciate the visit.

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