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This Thing Called Love

This Thing Called Love – 4 Lines After feasting on this amazing THING called love all through the NIGHT, we sweetly sip from silver goblets, aged wine rich, red, warm, and mellow, wistfully wishing to delay the threatening dawn that breaks golden, pale yellow. In Wonderland, we woozily waltz - wildly, wantonly, to wondrous Wagner. 12-17-2015 Contest: 4 Lines Sponsor: Silent One Placement: 2nd

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James Inman

Date: 6/26/2017 8:42:00 AM

A never ending moment, beautifully expressed.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2017 1:01:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, I am so delighted by your lovely compliment! Best regards. Pandita

John Michaels

Date: 4/2/2017 5:25:00 AM

Great piece, Pandita. The last line, especially, is a masterclass in alliteration! Congratulations on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2017 1:10:00 PM

Hi John, it's so good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your always lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Funom Makama

Date: 1/23/2016 12:36:00 PM

you sound so tenderly sincere, soft and branded in a deep-thoughtful way. A great piece as usual from a very good friend and poet

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/24/2016 3:15:00 PM

My friend, I appreciate your wonderful complimentary words which continue to inspire me! Thank you, Funom. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/23/2015 2:25:00 AM

A beautiful, romantic verse, Pandita. Congratulations for your well, deserved WIN! ;-)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/23/2015 8:40:00 AM

Hi Teddy, thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:00:00 AM

Superb write n win Pandita.. big congrats! I hv missed reading ur work!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/22/2015 8:35:00 AM

Hi Dr. Sharma, it's so good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your always lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/21/2015 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations on 2nd place win! Excellent!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:12:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, I am so delighted by your lovely compliment! Have a wonderful day! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 7:06:00 AM

A Love Feast!! Well done Pandita...a delight to read;) Congratulations on this lovely podium finish! // Wishing you all the very best for Christmas and the New Year:) *** paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:14:00 PM

Hi Paul, I am so delighted that you enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for the awesome compliments. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year to you and yours! Pandita

Michael Tor

Date: 12/21/2015 6:53:00 AM

What a party Pandita you know how to celebrate and you do it with this wonderful win. congratulations!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Michael, for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

John Lawless

Date: 12/20/2015 9:35:00 PM

Now that is night that would be remembered.. congrats on your placement

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:30:00 PM

Hi John, many thanks my friend for stopping by with your wonderful comments/compliments. Warmest regards. Pandita

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/20/2015 8:26:00 PM

Beautiful, Pandita! Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:16:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra, for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:22:00 PM

oooh, such a sensual one, Pandita. ME LIKES. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:09:00 PM

Andie, I appreciate your wonderful complimentary words continue to inspire me! Thank you, my friend. Pandita

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/20/2015 5:46:00 PM

A Wonderful Love! The alliteration is amazing Pandita! Congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:17:00 PM

Hi Balveen, thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:29:00 PM

pandita, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:10:00 PM

Thank you, my friend! I always appreciate your kind congratulations! All the best! Pandita

Faye Gibson

Date: 12/20/2015 4:04:00 PM

Beautifully done, Pandita. I love your writing. Congratulations.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:07:00 PM

Hi Faye, thank you so much for your kind words which always mean a lot to me! Pandita

John Hamilton

Date: 12/20/2015 11:45:00 AM

Pandita what a wonderful write very well conceived and delivered, congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 3:19:00 PM

Thank you so very much, John, for your lovely comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice week ahead, my friend! Pandita "

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:23:00 AM

PANDITA, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/21/2015 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! I always appreciate your kind congratulations! All the best! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 12/18/2015 3:49:00 PM

Hi Pandita, this is such a creative piece that you have superbly penned! I especially love the Alliteration of the 4th line - genius! It's a winner in my books and a 7! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/18/2015 3:54:00 PM

My dear Kika, I appreciate your visit, kind complimentary words, and high score which serve as inspiration for me to continue writing! Thank you, my friend. Pandita