Pandita Sietesantos Poet Alliteration

This Thing Called Love

This Thing Called Love – 4 Lines

After feasting on this amazing THING called love all through the NIGHT,

we sweetly sip from silver goblets, aged wine rich, red, warm, and mellow,
wistfully wishing to delay the threatening dawn that breaks golden, pale yellow.

In Wonderland, we woozily waltz - wildly, wantonly, to wondrous Wagner.



12-17-2015

Contest:      4 Lines
Sponsor:      Silent One
Placement:   2nd

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James Inman June 26, 2017 at 8:42 AM A never ending moment, beautifully expressed. Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2017 at 1:01 PM Thank you, my friend, I am so delighted by your lovely compliment! Best regards. Pandita

John Michaels April 2, 2017 at 5:25 AM Great piece, Pandita. The last line, especially, is a masterclass in alliteration! Congratulations on your win! Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2017 at 1:10 PM Hi John, it's so good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your always lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Funom Makama January 23, 2016 at 12:36 PM you sound so tenderly sincere, soft and branded in a deep-thoughtful way. A great piece as usual from a very good friend and poet Pandita Sietesantos January 24, 2016 at 3:15 PM My friend, I appreciate your wonderful complimentary words which continue to inspire me! Thank you, Funom. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi December 23, 2015 at 2:25 AM A beautiful, romantic verse, Pandita. Congratulations for your well, deserved WIN! ;-) Pandita Sietesantos December 23, 2015 at 8:40 AM Hi Teddy, thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:00 AM Superb write n win Pandita.. big congrats! I hv missed reading ur work! Pandita Sietesantos December 22, 2015 at 8:35 AM Hi Dr. Sharma, it's so good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your always lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 7:19 AM Congratulations on 2nd place win! Excellent! Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:12 PM Thank you, my friend, I am so delighted by your lovely compliment! Have a wonderful day! Pandita

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 7:06 AM A Love Feast!! Well done Pandita...a delight to read;) Congratulations on this lovely podium finish! // Wishing you all the very best for Christmas and the New Year:) *** paul Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:14 PM Hi Paul, I am so delighted that you enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for the awesome compliments. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year to you and yours! Pandita

Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:53 AM What a party Pandita you know how to celebrate and you do it with this wonderful win. congratulations! Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:21 PM Thank you very much, Michael, for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

John Lawless December 20, 2015 at 9:35 PM Now that is night that would be remembered.. congrats on your placement Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:30 PM Hi John, many thanks my friend for stopping by with your wonderful comments/compliments. Warmest regards. Pandita

Sandra Haight December 20, 2015 at 8:26 PM Beautiful, Pandita! Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:16 PM Thank you very much, Sandra, for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:22 PM oooh, such a sensual one, Pandita. ME LIKES. BIG congrats on a well deserved win. Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:09 PM Andie, I appreciate your wonderful complimentary words continue to inspire me! Thank you, my friend. Pandita

Balveen Cheema December 20, 2015 at 5:46 PM A Wonderful Love! The alliteration is amazing Pandita! Congrats! Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:17 PM Hi Balveen, thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:29 PM pandita, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:10 PM Thank you, my friend! I always appreciate your kind congratulations! All the best! Pandita

Faye Gibson December 20, 2015 at 4:04 PM Beautifully done, Pandita. I love your writing. Congratulations. Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:07 PM Hi Faye, thank you so much for your kind words which always mean a lot to me! Pandita

John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 11:45 AM Pandita what a wonderful write very well conceived and delivered, congrats on your win! Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 3:19 PM Thank you so very much, John, for your lovely comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice week ahead, my friend! Pandita "

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:23 AM PANDITA, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 11:23 AM Thank you, my friend! I always appreciate your kind congratulations! All the best! Pandita

Kika Ayala December 18, 2015 at 3:49 PM Hi Pandita, this is such a creative piece that you have superbly penned! I especially love the Alliteration of the 4th line - genius! It's a winner in my books and a 7! Kika Pandita Sietesantos December 18, 2015 at 3:54 PM My dear Kika, I appreciate your visit, kind complimentary words, and high score which serve as inspiration for me to continue writing! Thank you, my friend. Pandita