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This Phrase Called 'True Love'

True love
if you're lucky enough 
to find and nurture it;
the ticking hand of the clock,
as eternal as a cascading waterfall.

True love,
if it pulls you out 
of a bottomless abyss, weaves 
a glittering tapestry of enchantment
that remains unbroken.

True love, 
if gifted to you 
by the heavenly father,
is endless; as everlasting as time itself;
a gift that keeps on giving!

True love, 
if you can hold on to it, 
never slips out of your grasp
for it is as sure as God's boundless 
and limitless blessings! 

True love,
if it unexpectedly sneaks up 
and hits you in the pit of your soul,
may the happiness it brings you 
be infinite, I fervently pray.



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Writing Prompt - Endless - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance LaFrance
Date written:06/08/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roberts Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:27 AM
Love it!
Ibeh Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 9:18 AM
I'm glad you did, Helen!:-) That's my wife's name as well. Thanks for dropping by!
La France Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this lovely love penned poem, and I like the image quote too, peace _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Thank you very much for my placement and the congratulations, Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Brul Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 1:48 AM
Breathtaking piece! Congratulations!!
Ibeh Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Thank you so much, JCB:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a beautiful/wonderful write. True Love Is the Best. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.........
Ibeh Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Poet. It’s a beautiful poem with the most beautiful theme! Best wishes ~ Mala
Ibeh Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Thank you so much, Malabika:-)
Daniel Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Brilliant, Edward, Congratulations:)
Ibeh Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Thank you very much, Jo:-)
Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Edward, for your win at the top of #1. I knew it when I read it the first time.
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Thanks again for the revisit and congrats, Vijay:-) It's always delightful to get your feedback, my friend.
Alex Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:29 AM
This is another beautiful poem of yours. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Hankins Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Edward, this is so beautiful. Exquisite writing and so worthy of your first place win in the contest. Simply lovely!
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and visit, Milt:-) Most appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Edward, congratulations on your first place win with this thoughtful poem. Many beautiful images my friend. Blessings!
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and congratulations, Sam:-) Blessings, my friend.
Pinet Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 8:50 AM
"as eternal as a cascading waterfall," an apt and beautiful description of true love my friend, well done, Emile
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Thank you very much, Emile:-) I appreciate the wonderful comments and visit, my friend.
Logan Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Your lines are wonderful expressions of true love. Nicely scribed, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Thank you very much, Jenna:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Hello Edward, For those tat are waiting for a true love ,must be patience. It is slowly coming their way. blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Hello Edward, your welcome Edward. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 12:23 PM
From your lips to God's ears, Darlene:-) I appreciate the wonderful visit, my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Nothing on earth beats that feeling of true love, great use of the allocated words Edward. Best of luck in the contest, hope you are well. Tom
Ibeh Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Thank you very much, Tom:-) I couldn't agree with you more about true love. Have a blessed day, my friend.
Pandit Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 10:12 AM
This is superb my friend. True love in any form is beautiful--as is your poem. Into my FAVES.
Ibeh Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Thank you so much for the feedback and FAV, Vijay:-) Most appreciated, my friend.
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