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This Moment Lost To Lust

warm breath against flesh lingering touch and soft skin it isn't enough For Contest: Sensuous Senryus

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Emma Mantle

Date: 6/30/2011 3:38:00 AM

Congrats on your win Victoria. This was a well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/28/2011 6:51:00 AM

Nice one, you greedy girl, you. lol. Congratulations on your placement. Well done, Victoria. :))

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 2:42:00 AM

It never seems like we can have too much passion in our lives, Victioria. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/27/2011 9:00:00 PM

Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 5:17:00 PM

This is really beautiful!

Date: 6/27/2011 2:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Francine's contest, very nice. Alexa

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2011 2:29:00 PM

Victoria, congratulations on your second place win in Francine's contest ;)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 1:50:00 PM

ahhhh line 1 & 2 are perfection, stick with the concept of phrase verses sentences, the thought in line three could be communicated with a word like [shivering] I know 5/7/5 was asked for ;)...congrad's so nice to see you win big! Light & Love