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This Moment Lost To Lust

warm breath against flesh
lingering touch and soft skin
it isn't enough


For Contest: Sensuous Senryus

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Emma Mantle

June 30, 2011 at 3:38 AM

Congrats on your win Victoria. This was a well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)

Delysia Hendricks

June 28, 2011 at 6:51 AM

Nice one, you greedy girl, you. lol. Congratulations on your placement. Well done, Victoria. :))

Carolyn Devonshire

June 28, 2011 at 2:42 AM

It never seems like we can have too much passion in our lives, Victioria. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

June 27, 2011 at 9:00 PM

Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Andrea Dietrich

June 27, 2011 at 5:17 PM

This is really beautiful!

June 27, 2011 at 2:54 PM

Congrats on your win in Francine's contest, very nice. Alexa

Wilma Neels

June 27, 2011 at 2:29 PM

Victoria, congratulations on your second place win in Francine's contest ;)

Debbie Guzzi

June 27, 2011 at 1:50 PM

ahhhh line 1 & 2 are perfection, stick with the concept of phrase verses sentences, the thought in line three could be communicated with a word like [shivering] I know 5/7/5 was asked for ;)...congrad's so nice to see you win big! Light & Love