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This Mind of Mine-

My mind is a construct I desire to escape from it However the routine is complete The self hating ritual has already begun I desperately try to block out the criticism from within But I cannot see myself how others see me I am trapped in the never-ending conceptions of my own mind

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/9/2025 11:57:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.