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This Merciless Heat

This merciless heat smothers the earth with air-less wings It creeps in by degrees stifling life's breeze gives Nature short shrift until it lifts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/6/2020 3:40:00 PM
We actually haven't had much heat yet this summer, the high is usually in the low 70's - but there have been hot summers which were quite merciless!
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Date: 7/2/2020 12:18:00 PM
i agree, gershon! love the ending...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2020 7:07:00 PM
May the heat lift soon!! Thanks, Ilene. :) gw
Date: 7/2/2020 7:58:00 AM
Gershon, another interesting imagism poem nicely done. Unfortunately, the merciless heat doesn't seem to adversely affect the covid-19 pandemic's grip. Take care and stay safe! ~Mark
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2020 7:07:00 PM
I think that idea (about heat killing off the virus) was a Trumpian Fantasy, frankly. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 7/2/2020 2:27:00 AM
I am loving this heat; it makes me feel like a cat in the sun as I lounge on my porch couch.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2020 7:07:00 PM
I am loving the heat too... about 15 minutes at a stretch. Over 90 gets to me now. ~ Old Man Gersh
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2020 7:06:00 PM
I am loving the heat too... about 15 minutes at a stretch. Over 90 gets to me now. ~ Old Man Gersh
Date: 7/1/2020 8:40:00 PM
If you've got any spare, send it over, our temps are 14°c at the moment. Tom
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Date: 7/1/2020 8:59:00 PM
I'll send you 6.5 degrees Celsius, and I think that you and I will have solved the problem at hand!... Maybe the 'Supreme World Council of Know-Nothings' will now name us 'Master Scientists of Climate Change!' Thanks, Tom

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