This Line

I'm so late for work; this line is just crawling along
With only two windows now open here out of ten.
Though silent, inside me,  I'm wailing a misery song
and wishing I lived in a century way back when. . .

Far back to a time when a person might buy untaxed land,
When air still was clean and the number of people was small.
Neighbors were friendly and offered to give you a hand
and probably people did not need a license at all.

But now we have all become numbers that wait in a line;
And yearly you pay for the right to  keep driving your car.
Yes, honor Big Brother, or you will be faced with a fine,
and nor does it matter in which of the states that you are.

I think I would rather be driving an old Model-T
than be standing in this frigging line at the dang DMV.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/10/2013 9:42:00 AM
A NICE WIN ANDREA... LINDA
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Date: 6/7/2013 1:02:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations with your poem. thank you for supporting my latest contest LUV~SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2010 9:46:00 AM
I had to laugh Andrea because if I get in a line I always pick the slowest one. If I then move into a quick line it will slow down. I still like today's world and yes times were slower back then but I like today's convenience. Phyl
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Date: 10/12/2010 12:08:00 PM
aint that the truth good job
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:17:00 PM
Yes, waiting in line has got to be the worst way to waste one's time!! Crazy how these lines can get so long-- and haha enjoyed that last couplet of yours-- congrats-- I really enjoy reading all these line poems :)-- hugs to you-- nikko :)
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Date: 9/24/2010 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Andrea. I must say I agree with you. I just hate waiting in lines and if the line is too long I go away and come back another time. Love, Connie
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Paula Swanson's contest "Line". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Andrea! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:35:00 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this wonderful entry
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:03:00 PM
many congratulations dear friend for this lovely poem.
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Date: 9/23/2010 8:04:00 PM
a verse with a point, a stand, a wee bit of moral outrage, go gal, glad you won! "There's no joy in Mudville here :( Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:07:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in the Line contest.. another wonderful write and win to enjoy tonight with luv my friend..
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:08:00 PM
Conmgratulations on this well deserved win, Andrea
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:54:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Andrea. have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 9/23/2010 8:03:00 AM
I hate to upset you, dear Andrea, but I go back to those untaxed days, or it seems like it. Well, not really, though when I was a kid I didn't worry about taxes. Oh to be a kid again. Yes, and there were still Model-Ts rolling down the streets when I was a kid. Love your stuff. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/23/2010 7:29:00 AM
You offered a great laugh at the end, Andrea, but the other verses made me wish I could join you in traveling back in time to a simpler world. You are so right -- we are all about "numbers" now. Social Security numbers, telephone numbers, PIN numbers, credit card numbers, etc. It would be so nice to live in a time when we are known only by our names and reputations. An excellent entry for the lines contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:46:00 AM
You made me giggle while reading your last two lines Andrea :) thanks for the smiles. Hope your Thursday is going to ge a good one, love Wilma
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:37:00 AM
All too true! Funny poem! Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:22:00 AM
Yes Andrea, sometimes it is really a pity that we cannot turn back the clock! I guess you'd have enjoyed driving a Ford-T! So well written, enjoyed the read!...Have a great weekend!..Gert:)
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:40:00 AM
You have created very interesting on the theme Line, Andrea. Good luck
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:54:00 PM
Nice take on the line thingy...I HATE the DMV.. I think you may have another winner..BG
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:59:00 PM
Oh dear, so angry Andrea, This is another awesome "line poem" i've read today. I think Paula needs a medal for thinking this contest up.. Harry
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:20:00 PM
Cute one Andrea!Yes it can be sooooo frustrating for sure! take care~Deb
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