This Jagged Ragged Pain

"Her pain was so jagged.  You couldn't touch her, without it slicing through you too.  I wanted to fold myself around her and absorb the rest of the blows life would deliver."
                                                   ~ Tarryn Fisher

"My faith didn't remove the pain, but it got me through the pain.  Trusting God didn't diminish or vanquish the anguish, but it enabled me to endure it."
                                                   ~ Robert Rogers


Tears flow down my cheeks
like small rivulets
Pain is like a volcano erupting within me
It burns down all defences
I sob like a little child
Agonizing spasms cut through me
like a jagged knife sharpened on both sides
I cry out loud
Is there no relief?
Torment churns my being
like a grinder mixing it all or a mixer grinding me
I toss and turn
restless and lachrymose
Anguish pricks my insides
It's like walking barefoot on jagged rocks
My physical pain is just a minuscule fragment
compared to my Saviour's agony on the Cross
He knows and understands my heart’s deepest aches
And so, I remind myself of that
and find my comfort in Him.


20th March 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/27/2022 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations, again!
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Date: 3/26/2022 6:43:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful and I like the quotes too ~Constance,
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Date: 3/25/2022 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A wonderful write. Not sure if this is a write or true. Pain is the worst thing in life. I will add you to my prayer list. Have blessed day....................
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Date: 3/24/2022 9:18:00 PM
"like small rivulets"like a grinder mixing it all or a mixer grinding me" - Great similes. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/24/2022 4:36:00 PM
Jo--I'm sorry you have to bear pain. So many of my friends do. You write a lovely poem even if it is about pain. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/20/2022 1:06:00 PM
He gave his life to save us and suffered on the cross. Good luck in the contest Jo, hope you are having a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 3/20/2022 10:42:00 AM
You show great emotion in this poem. He died for us to save us. Well written.
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