Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Pantoum

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- This Is Your Song My Brother -

Daniel my brother this is your song
If there is a God in heaven, not fake or fantasy
He knows you have a good heart
I cry at night, you will understand my pain

If there is a God in heaven, not fake or fantasy
Please dear brother say everything is fine
I cry at night, you will understand my pain
Sorry seems to be the hardest word in the world

Please dear brother say everything is fine 
To forgive, I never got to say goodbye
Sorry seems to be the hardest word in the world
All is gone, this is a goodbye yellow brick road

To forgive, I never got to say goodbye
If I could fly in harmony with thin paper wings
All is gone, this is a goodbye yellow brick road
Now I am alone and lost in the empty sky

If I could fly in harmony with thin paper wings
He knows you have a good heart
Now I am alone and lost in the empty sky
Daniel my brother this is your song







Song titles by Elton John, listed below :


Daniel
Your Song
If There's A God In Heaven
A Good Heart
I Cry at Night
Sorry Seems To Be The Hardest Word
Please
Goodbye
Harmony
This is a Goodbye Yellow Brick Road
Empty Sky











09.04.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Pandita Sietesantos April 14, 2018 at 9:52 AM Superb pantoum, dear Anne-Lise! You aced it putting those song titles together in a beautiful, smooth flowing manner! I am sure this masterpiece will do very well in SO's contest! Love it! Hugs. Pandita Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2018 at 11:57 AM - Not for S.O. contest, Pandita :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams April 13, 2018 at 7:30 AM I love Elton John and you have used some of my favorite songs of his in this wonderful Pantoum. Amazingly done Anne- Lise....Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2018 at 11:55 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith April 11, 2018 at 12:33 PM Great timing Anne-Lise, we had a two hour tribute to Sir Elton last night on TV, well done my dear... Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2018 at 1:20 PM - I wish I saw it, Charlie - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley April 11, 2018 at 1:24 AM Lovely Pantoun and a fine choice of songs, Anee-Lise, well done. Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2018 at 4:13 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton April 10, 2018 at 6:33 AM Very beautiful heart felt ode for your brother and pantoum. x God exists, there is a heaven. Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2018 at 11:47 AM - Leanne, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 9, 2018 at 5:56 PM I love every one of these hits Anne-Lise. You created a real gem with those titles. Brava! : ) Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2018 at 11:47 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Yazmin Malik April 9, 2018 at 2:33 PM Beautiful <3 Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:46 PM - Many thanks, Yazmin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper April 9, 2018 at 10:56 AM Excellent use of the song titles, Sunshine, good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:44 PM - Not for contest, Eve :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 9, 2018 at 10:22 AM impressive pantoum, dear anne... you'll make elton proud,,, happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:28 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2018 at 9:27 AM Masterfully expressed, you should enter the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:27 PM - "My Summer Flower, Josephine" is already posted to the contest, Richard :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta April 9, 2018 at 9:25 AM A nice pantoum, sunshine ... It was a pleasure to go through ... Good luck with the contest ... Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:37 PM - Many thanks Probir, for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina April 9, 2018 at 7:45 AM Captain Fantastic couldn't have said it any better. Nice tribute to Elton...Yellow Brick road was the first album I ever bought...So cool. LOve it...All the best Charlie Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:43 PM - Many sensitive texts from E.John ... I always feel something special with his songs :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Captain Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham April 9, 2018 at 6:38 AM Another great pantoum Sunshine, you do these really well. I grew up listening to Elton John. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2018 at 1:54 PM :))) Tom Cunningham April 10, 2018 at 1:15 PM You've put me under pressure now lol Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:36 PM - There are so many great artists ... a fun way to write a tribute, Tom :) - I look forward to reading your Pantoum poem :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 9, 2018 at 6:30 AM Yes, there is a God in heaven and yes, everything is fine furthermore harmony you both bind dearest , Anne-Lise ! A very spiritual Pantoum that uplifts the soul! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:32 PM - She hopes he has come to heaven ... that's her comfort, my friend Demetrios :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 6:23 AM Awesome, Anne-Lise! The song titles blend seamlessly.. a poem of sweet brotherly love! Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 2:29 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison April 9, 2018 at 4:50 AM Bravo Anne-Lise, you wove the song titles in so beautifully and I love many of the ones you have chosen plus so many more:-) Was lucky enough to see Elton in concert twice, he is quite the showman and a fabulous singer:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 4:56 AM - You make me jealous, Jan ... I've always wanted to "meet" Elton John ... - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)