This Is What I Call A Loyal Love

Fur bounds, through the cottony breeze, to me.
On a warm, summery day,
the scent of dog resounds.

A wet nose, commiserate smile and hug.
Against my skin, he reclines.
I’m always home with him.

His eyes, see not, purple flowers blooming;
not intuitive of hue;
but bud’s loyal as bees.

My shoulder’s bare, does he know skin, or care?
He stays very close to me
and wanders nearly far.

My pretty dress and handsome hat amidst
the enchantment of meadow.
He doesn’t know its charm.

Obeys, he stays, protects territory.
A fine life, with benefits;
faithful to each other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Godwin Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 5:17 PM
My memory thinks I've already commented, already told you that I enjoyed your poem very much. Most entries are about dogs, it seems, and I agree that intelligent breeds not only love you, but are extremely loyal. I hope that you have 'reality-known' such a faithful canine love. I am blessed to have known such in my life ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 8:43 PM
I remember their personalities! Our beagle, Sparky loved watermelon and pizza. He was mischievous!
Proxenos Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:53 AM
I love dogs, they are so loving, so caring, so furry and warm to come close to your legs and warms the cockles of your heart, their cold nose a reminder that they are quite well and enjoying their life with you. Hugs and love Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 8:41 PM
Love your descript…especially the cold nose ;)
One Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 8:24 AM
Dogs are so much more loyal than humans... Glad you have or have had a loyal dog..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Rolland Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 2:00 AM
so lovely poem, we can trust a dog, more than a man, wish they could talk ( is he a dog ?) have a nice week end poet
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 5:02 AM
This poem was for a contest. There was a picture that went with it. Now, I just have grand - dogs, cats, and bunnies. When my kids were little we had dogs, cats, a hamster and a bird (not all at the same time).
Singh Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 11:48 PM
Lovely.Wish you the best
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 5:00 AM
Thank you, Akham!
Hind Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 7:24 PM
So so sweet! I am a cat person, but love dogs, too. Love animals. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 5:00 AM
Thank you, Paige :)
Mckeithan Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 6:00 PM
Wonderful imagery for this poem Kim. Good luck in the contest. We are dog owners and we are a team.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Oliver! :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:53 PM
i love how you turbed ghis around, kim... dog = loyalty... how's that for originality? clap, clap
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, sweet lady! xx
Brotherton Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 12:07 PM
A great poem, my friend. I like to think of myself as my dog's best friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 4:12 PM
Aww!
Allison Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 10:42 AM
aww mans best friend, ever faithful to the end! a lovely poem Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 11:59 AM
Thank you, Jan :) xx
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