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a lone man just shaking his head Constantly stumbling His mental status; Causes disclaimers; Some say he’s got dementia; Needless to say; To say the least; He’s often found on the streets; Walking and talking; Shaking his head Constantly stumbling Some say he’s a vagabond; Some say he’s a creep; Some say he’s a panhandler; Some say just a thief; Who’s to say he’s discarded; Maybe a misplaced veteran; Just where is his family; Shaking his head Constantly stumbling White haired man with no plans; Bronze tanned with no plans; Got nothing but poverty in his hands; Could you lend a dime, a dollar, a five, a twenty? So in this mess; In his sickness, stressed; Is he or is he not displaced; Shaking his head Constantly stumbling Is he honest or just for profit? A panhandler despondent, dishonest; Distorted vision, I believe he has a concussion; Like the wind blowing, flowing here and there Stumbling his head, in his bag some moldy day old bread; Constantly shaking, is he real or faking a thief or actor; Homeless/dying or laughing- He’s every so breezy… They call him Dizzy
9/4/19 4th Place placement in Contest For Bring A Character To Life Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 9/8/2019 1:14:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and bringing Dizzy to life.
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