'this Heart Don'T Beat For You Anymore'

It might look convincing 
But I just don’t feel it anymore
When people talk about it
I don’t feel it anymore
The rhythmic blows don’t hit home
The sounds are all spent
Just hollow, the refrain
It doesn’t mean a thing
I don’t think it ever did


The beating of your heart
Is not a conduit anymore
It’s like walking a labyrinth 
Wall to wall 
On a path to nowhere
'Cause this heart don’t beat,
This heart don’t beat,
This heart don’t beat for you anymore


You don’t need to feel it
‘Cause it’s written all o’er my face
It’s not like I planned it
It’s just the way things ended
Hearts can’t be dictated
I’m sorry if this hurts 
But I can’t play this role no more
I’m sorry if I’m breaking your heart


The beating of your heart
Is not a conduit anymore
It’s like walking a labyrinth 
From wall to wall 
On a path to nowhere
‘Cause this heart don’t beat,
This heart don’t beat,
This heart don’t beat for you anymore


Saying I don’t feel it
Boils down to conviction
The moving signs are everywhere
It’s clear like daylight
My heart refuses to beat for you

The beating of your heart
Is not a conduit anymore
It’s like walking a labyrinth 
From wall to wall 
On a path to nowhere
‘Cause this heart don’t beat,
This heart don’t beat,
This heart don’t beat for you anymore



*THIS TRAIN DON’T STOP THERE ANYMORE BY ELTON JOHN*
Contest: Dear John
Placed: 7th
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/22/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma in John Heck's contest "Dear John". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:04:00 PM
Yeaaaa!! You are on the list. So glad it won, Wilma. You rock and so do your lyrics here. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2011 12:22:00 PM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Wilma. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congrats Wilma my friend on your wonderful win in the Dear John contest with this fabulous write and entry luv.. enjoy ... the warm 82 degrees is so agreeing with me on the Hawaiian Islands ... for one more day ..
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:47:00 AM
Wonderful adaption Wilma on Elton's fine song. Boy oh boy, this was not the easiest of contests I'll tell you. Many congrats on your win, have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:06:00 AM
What a great piece....very well twist to Elton John's lyrics, Wilma ! Congratulations on your win! Well done!
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Date: 1/30/2011 7:44:00 AM
Wow! I haven't heard this song in a really long time. This is such a great rendition of the original. Actually, I like your lyrics better - (sorry, Bernie Taupin). Congratulations on your BIG WIN in John Heck's contest. Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 1/30/2011 6:50:00 AM
Lovely adaptation.Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/7/2011 7:16:00 AM
This is just "wonderful" you did a "fantastic" job writing this lyrical song for the contest and I wish you the best of luck~~
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:23:00 AM
Lyrical work..Do you sing and play an instrument? May your gift flow onto the pages of soup for all of us to enjoy...Thanks for the review of my work..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:05:00 PM
Ps: I want passion but not naughty. Leave that for my mind hehe
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:04:00 PM
So... are you ditching me? :-( Ok Kiss Kiss with tongues. Is that better? :-) love this poem Wilma. you have a way with words. Write me another poem. title " When we meet this is what I want to say"
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Date: 1/5/2011 3:45:00 PM
wowowowow, wilma, VERY good job for the elton john contest. I have a song in mind just no "hook" for how to employ it! If this is not on the winner list, I'll be pissed. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/5/2011 2:19:00 PM
Im a big Beatle fan as you which means Elton John would follow not that far behind.. Your words and feelings make up beautiful lyrics to it..Sir Elton would be proud as am I...RE. "Helped You Fly" you have read into to it perfectly..sometimes the people you help don't see it the same, but I won't change who I am.. then it wouldn't be me....with Love always Michael
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Date: 1/5/2011 12:54:00 PM
Emphatic words Wilma.. the refrain in this piece is brilliant and creates no doubt the emotion u want to express ...a special piece of poetry and a tremendous read my friend.. thankxx for your wonderful comment son my poetry and please please send some of that lovely heat from Cape Town to me .. as another snowstorm is predicted this weekend luv..
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Date: 1/5/2011 10:12:00 AM
Although I haven't heard this Elton John tune, I can relate to the feelings you express so eloquently, Wilma. When feelings of love cease to exist, it is usually apparent to one who still cherishes you. But in cases where it's not perceived, it's best to set them free with an honest expression of your emotions. Excellent poem that should do well in John's contest, my friend. Always wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/5/2011 9:31:00 AM
I'm not familiar with this Elton John song, but you have chosen some good words here to tell a descriptive poetic story.
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Date: 1/5/2011 6:02:00 AM
I have not read or heart this of Elton John. But the way you have written yours gives an inkling of it, Wilma. Good luck in the contest.
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