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This Happy Memory

Sun Calls Beckons Raw freedom My divine carte blanche Sun pointing way to new ventures Released of commitments and responsibilities Precious days of undaunted compliance to nature’s call, vivacious sun worshipper I Was Younger Radiant Feeling explosive Devout follower of that sun Joyfully bursting with euphoric fanaticism I was in my prime, fortunate, free at last, and it was a summer like no other The Air Magic Summer bliss Nothing else mattered T’was an endless summer of sun My heart was atune longing for that invite to dance How many times I wish this magnificent memory could only last forever Submitted on January 12, 2018 for contest THE MAGIC OF THREE sponsored by BROKEN WINGS - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 2/13/2018 2:14:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this dreamy write, well done !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, BW. Your contests are always a fun challenge.
Date: 2/13/2018 12:32:00 AM
A fine Fib, Line, congrats!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:26:00 PM
a fib !? LOL. Nothin' but the truth. Thanks for your visit and fun comment, Viv.
Date: 2/12/2018 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line ! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 10:20:00 PM
Much appreciated, Eve. Thanks for your visit and comment.
Date: 2/11/2018 7:21:00 PM
I can see why this was chosen to be honoured Line. Congrats on a fine win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/11/2018 7:37:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Much appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 1/12/2018 8:06:00 PM
wow, I love this. I am glad to see this form again. Now you have inspired me to do the same form. I too want to focus on happy memory. I think that was one of the themes, right? it was the one that appealed to me too!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/12/2018 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. It will be a pleasure to read your masterpiece.
Date: 1/12/2018 11:52:00 AM
- Happy and lovely memories, Line - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/12/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine.

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