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This Gathering of Words

I gather up my words barbs that have missed a target strewn about rose-like ………..in beauty’s shriveling death Inert objects …..injected….infected - a self inflicted suffering - dulled daggers of despair …………..thrust into the soul of speech This gathering of words aching to be free to plunge the bloodied pen ………………into an unlined emptiness ©5/21/2018 theme – A gathering up my words Let Your Pen Drip – Poetry Contest Sponsor – Broken Wings

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Date: 6/5/2018 9:06:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, John.
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Date: 5/23/2018 10:33:00 AM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive write, well done ~
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Date: 5/23/2018 5:26:00 AM
Great write John and the last 2 lines are amazing! Congratulations
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Date: 5/22/2018 9:46:00 PM
John, I wish I could wax eloquent in the manner that you do. I do okay with simple rhymes and limericks. Beyond that, I struggle. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this winning entry. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/22/2018 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 5/21/2018 5:08:00 PM
Well done, John. Winning wishes
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John Lawless
Date: 5/29/2018 5:52:00 AM
thank you for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 5/21/2018 11:36:00 AM
This is just amazing poetry!!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/29/2018 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Judith.....sorry to be so late responding but I've been held hostage by my grandkids over the holiday weekend....

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