Gary Bateman Poet Free verse

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I completed this particular free verse write, entitled: "This Fury-Fiery Moment of Hot Sensual Love," on May 19, 2016. I really enjoyed the play on words in this particular write along with its alliterative intonation and cadence. I wrote this one, with a tongue-in-cheek humor and with an obvious flippant intent, of course! My wife got a really good laugh out of this one, understandably, when she read it. Nevertheless, the imagery of this write does render a definite message for sure -- depending on the reader's point of view! (Gary Bateman - May 26, 2016)

Categories: emotions, hyperbole, love, passion, romance, sensual, and sexy.

This Fury-Fiery Moment of Hot Sensual Love

This Fury-Fiery Moment of Hot Sensual Love

This fury-fiery moment of hot sensual love nourishes us now,
As we move from a caress to razor-close, then to lover-close,
Intertwined as one in a true tempestuous storm sparkling afire!

We share such a white-hot passion with a boundless fiery desire,
Blending us deeply in a fury-fiery emotion of love’s true inspire;
Bringing us to this apex with lust as love and love in lust’s hour!

This magic moment melds our passion into a true alchemy of love.
This prized-perfect passion purrs us now into satiated contentment,
As our hearts bask-bright in a fury-fiery moment of sensual desire! 

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved – May 19, 2016
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Maria Williams November 27, 2017 at 1:27 AM Mein Lieber Gary, Your ‘Fury - Fiery Moment’ poem with its internal verse enhances it and there is no doubt whatsoever in the metaphors of the sensations experienced. Its interesting how you flipped the line ‘lust as love and love in lust’s hour!’ creating the connection with a play on the sensuality to create the perfect subtle image. You've had many views and it's been most popular I see. My fondest ... Maria Continued on Comment 2 Gary Bateman November 27, 2017 at 8:33 AM Hello Meine Liebe Maria!! Well, I see here that you did definitely take a read and interest in my "Fury-Fiery" rhyme exposition!! I will certainly need to read those poems you've completed based on your list below, that I've not yet had the opportunity to read. I look forward to reading them, of course!! I shall be in touch later, and continued best wishes to you!! Mit Besten Gruess!! Gary Maria Williams November 27, 2017 at 1:30 AM Hi again Gary, Following on from my last comment - My Erotic Love series and Sensual poems while not entirely fictional deal with a subtle metaphysical and physical connection you so like...It to create an awareness of the connection between the bonding of the physical and the inherent Energy seeking to manifest through physical contact of individuals of kindred spirits Hope you have time to read them appreciate the music... My fondest regards...Maria :) The List: She - Epitome of Erotic Love Summer Wine - An Erotic Romance Slow Hand – An Erotic Romance (you already read this) Drifting on Love – An Erotic Love story Then there are the Sensual poems: Lady of the night ( a recent poem) Fruit of nature (Haiku) Sensual Nature Seduction in spring (Haiku)...Maria

Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:57 AM This is a fury- fiery sensual write , Gary ! I enjoyed reading this poem of yours ...A 7 and a fav from me ~Cheers ~ Red Gary Bateman June 17, 2016 at 9:04 AM Many Thanks Red!! I'm very pleased that you liked this particular write. It was much fun putting this one together. Thanks too for the Seven/FAV. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid June 6, 2016 at 3:49 AM Your heart really sings through your pen to the maiden who holds the throne of your soul excellent write as always pal wishing you both a blessing of a week pal Gary Bateman June 7, 2016 at 4:19 AM Thanks Liam!! Appreciate it!! Best, Gary

Laura Breidenthal May 28, 2016 at 2:21 AM "Blending us deeply in a fury-fiery emotion of love’s true inspire" I adore that line in particular.. Awesome piece, Gary. The alliteration and flow of this piece really adds color to your composition. Excellent work. Always, Laura Gary Bateman May 30, 2016 at 12:10 PM Thanks Laura!! I'm glad you liked this particular rhyme write. These types of writes are always fun to do. The Alliteration did turn out well. Hope all is well by you Laura!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen May 26, 2016 at 1:37 PM - The messages are crystal clear dear Gary - I call it simply ...... a deep love that is still burning hot .... :) - No one can deny that love is beautiful :) - A lovely weekend for both of you - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gary Bateman May 26, 2016 at 5:54 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Thanks for your comments and your spot-on observations concerning this particular rhyme piece. I'm glad that you liked it! I really enjoy these well-articulated type of writes for sure. Continued best wishes from Ingrid and me. Best Wishes for the Week!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter May 26, 2016 at 11:18 AM Hi G! A very beautiful romantic sweet and passionate love poem,you've written here, my dear friend G.An excellent Free Verse, filled of so much love and devotion.Very beautifully written.Just awesome!I enjoyed it!Golden pen!A 7 +!A Fav! Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid!All the best to you too always, G!Spill ink!:)) Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)D. Gary Bateman May 26, 2016 at 5:47 PM Hello D!! Thanks for your super comments and the most gracious top rating and fav. I thought you might find this one to be of interest. I really enjoyed putting it together. Continued best wishes from Ingrid and me!! Spill Ink!! Cheers and Best, "G"

Demetrios Trifiatis May 26, 2016 at 9:01 AM Forgot the SEVEN! Gary Bateman May 26, 2016 at 2:50 PM Demetrios, Thanks very much!! Best Always, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis May 26, 2016 at 9:00 AM The wisdom of our creator is evident in our sensual love for HE has placed it there to help two people come closer together till true love develops in such a degree that its role will not, that much, be needed! A splendid writing and a seven, my friend Gary! Gary Bateman May 26, 2016 at 2:49 PM Ich bedanke mich sehr Herr Professor!! You've captured a very real aspect of "sensual love" -- especially as a relationship matures and two people are married for a long time. One can never deny that the right chemistry and attraction go hand-in-hand, but in the long term, that mysterious emotion we all know as "Love" is much, much more than just all of the original superficial stuff. Thanks my dear friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Tim Smith May 26, 2016 at 8:22 AM This is great Gary. You must have an exceptional wife to inspire this impassioned but whimsical poem. a7 Gary Bateman May 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM Thank Tim!! Great to hear from you!! My wife, Ingrid, does have a definite sense of humor. She always calls me "The Love Poet." She got a big laugh out of this one. We've been married now for 25 years. It's nice to know that passion and inspiration still do indeed exist!! Best Always, Gary