This Form - Paradelle

(Paradelle) What can I say to you more? What can I say to you more? This form for me is so much fun This form for me is so much fun To you what more can I say So much fun for me this form is… Afraid I am already addicted to this Afraid I am already addicted to this Playing with words from the heart they come Playing with words from the heart they come Already to this afraid I am addicted From the heart playing-they come from the heart! Hooked on verses of every kind Hooked on verses of every kind Toying with words, moving the lines Toying with words, moving the lines Of every kind hooked on verses Moving the lines-toying with words To you this form say more With words and verses of every kind Already addicted moving the lines From the heart hooked on to this Afraid they already come playing With so much fun! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2004 09.17.2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/18/2014 5:33:00 AM

Oh, Dorian, this is another surprise. I think Ebonics, the figure of speech is nicely used. I have never heard about this form. But I will surely look into it.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2014 10:01:00 AM

Hello my friend! Thanks for dropping by!xxxx D.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/17/2014 1:33:00 PM

Back again..my education sadly lacking Im afraid..I looked this up and thank you and Billy for giving me something new to think about. BG

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/17/2014 1:50:00 PM

Eh Barb how nice of you to drop by and thank you so much for commenting! I am so glad to know that Bill and I are giving you something more to ponder poetically about it . Lol. Have fun my friend and give it a swirl! Be back to your page to read more of your beautiful poetry very soon :) Just wish I have more hours and time some times everyday. Lol.... Hugs! Best to you! xxx D.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/17/2014 1:29:00 PM

let me look up this form, Ive never heard of it before. Thanks for stopping by my poem..BG

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/17/2014 2:03:00 PM

You're more than welcome my friend. Yes, go and research it, and see for yourself...to me is a lot of fun like most of the forms I do and use for years. Kind of tricky but you can do it Barb! Lol... Nothing impossible or to hard in life (and that goes for any poetry form or style too for that matter) when we have the will to accomplish it or at least try it. You can say I am very addicted to poetry and writing in all the forms that I find and like. I am so happy I brought this to your attention perhaps for the first time. It's out there but sadly no many poets use it. See ya around! Xxxx D.