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This Feeling

THIS POWERFUL FEELING INSIDE MY SINFUL HEART. THAT GROWS FAST LIKE A SEAD IN SUMMER. UNLEASHED POTENTIAL OF ITS DEVELOPMENT, DAMN IT TAKES ME TO THE SEVENTH HEAVEN. OH! HEAVENS I'M THE LUCKIEST GUY IN THE WORLD. AT TIMES I ENDUP GALVANISING ON ADORATION, NO ITS NOT ADOLESCENCE, ITS PURELY JUST THIS FEELING. SHE CAPTURED MY ATTENTION, BETWEEN US THERE WAS TENTION. I TOLD HER I'L BY ALL MEANS BUILD HER A MENTION. I GROUSE, LIKE A BROKEN WHEEL I SQUEL TO BE RECORGNISED. JUST SAY YOU LOVE ME AND NURTURE THIS FEELING INSIDE MY HEART.

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Date: 5/14/2015 2:01:00 AM
Good poem, bro!
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:01:00 PM
thank you folks
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Date: 4/26/2015 1:18:00 AM
Sakhisizwe, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2015 1:55:00 PM
Hoping you come back to post another powerful poem... LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:25:00 PM
Sakhisizwe, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/21/2015 1:51:00 PM
- Hello Sakhisizwe - I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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