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This Fathers Son

You kept your faith with cannons flaming when cowards left, their souls ablaze. You kept your trust--thy will proclaiming-- from none but death to sing your praise. Your word has always been its treasure when pain and suffering claimed their due. You never sought a languid pleasure from less than what you knew was true. You always treasured those in passing, just as those whose hearts you held. Your bond to life is everlasting far beyond what grace compelled. Your legacy is yet to be written; the end is not what you have done. It's toll is measured in lessons given and lived with pride by this fathers son. If Poetry Contest Sposored by Silent One 10/18/2018 1st. Place
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Smith Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Well up to your usual standard Charlie. You did subject proud and set a constantly powerful drumbeat with your use of words. Hope your year has started well. Very best regards David in NZ
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Thank you David...
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December 27, 2018 at 11:55 AM
I appreciate, intelligent poetry. Well done! Congrats!
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Thank you Richard...
Sathasivam Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 2:55 AM
Excellent and well penned. Congrats for your well-deserved win.
Smith Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thank you Ravi...
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Charlie
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations for your great win Charlie! :)
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Heidi...
Johnson Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Congrats Charlie, on your top placement. Good work.
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thanks Curtis...
Carber Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Congrats Charlie, on a much deserved win.
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thank you L.J.
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November 26, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win with this moving poem, Charlie! Janice
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Janice...
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November 26, 2018 at 12:39 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...
La France Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Charlie, congratulations on your win in the contest with this awesome write, well done ~
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thank you Dear Heart...
Roper Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest., Charlie.
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thank you Eve...
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November 25, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Congrats Charlie on you TOP win.
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thanks Vijay...
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November 25, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Congrats for your well-deserved win, Charlie! I'm honored to share first place with you - Bob
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Thank you Bob...
One Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Oh those cowards, fantastic entry for the contest Charlie.. A son will always look for a bond with his father, how sad some do not achieve or have the opportunity to do so... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Smith Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Thank you for sponsoring and your generous consideration and honor...
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November 15, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Hello Charlie, This rhyme is quite excellent!! To me, it reflects power, passion, and strength. Best of Luck in the contest with this entry. You may have the top winner here. Cheers and Best, Gary
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November 14, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Very beautiful and well written Charlie, good luck in contest.
Smith Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Thank you Arthur...
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November 14, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
Smith Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thank you Sara...
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November 11, 2018 at 9:18 PM
good poem
Smith Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Thank you Jon...
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November 6, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Hello Charlie, a beautiful phrased poem. Charlie. Have a nice evening my friend.
Smith Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Grasso Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Masterfully phrased. Another gem, Charlie. ...Fran
Smith Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Thank you Fran...
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November 5, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Awesome piece Charlie!
Smith Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Jay...
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November 2, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Oh yes! A fave for sure! You are a poet's poet Charlie...a compliment meant in highest regard! I love this kind of timeless writing that competes with master poet's endeavors. I am Faving this gem! : )
Smith Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Thank you Connie...
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November 1, 2018 at 8:38 PM
I am a huge, a lifelong fan of Kipling's poetry as well as his other famous stories told. This is one he would adore methinks. Certainly sawed me my friend. A fav...
Smith Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Thank you Robert...
Way Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Charlie, thank you for sharing with us. Enjoy reading it. Way
Smith Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Charlie...
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October 29, 2018 at 11:17 AM
A beautiful rhyme on the ode to Kipling, Charlie!!
Smith Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Thanks Ralph...
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