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This Discribes Me

harmonious chief among sinners a felonious monk pious creater of art deviously smart

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/21/2009 8:24:00 PM

And very clever! Awesome write here John. Love, Robin

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/5/2008 3:11:00 PM

huh? ok well this is a person i would love to meet, i like people who went through something, they tend to be more real.

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/4/2008 7:41:00 PM

haha Great description of yourself, you seem to be a complex person, but I think we are all very complex. :) Great write, ~Michaela~

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 12/4/2008 4:21:00 PM

Oh, how mischevious(sic)! Thank you for your words here and the wise ones in your comment on my poem. Thanks again, Autumn

Ali Matheny

Date: 12/4/2008 11:20:00 AM

I'm just tryin to say what I truly feel. . SORRY!! Love Your Friend Alexz ^n^

Ali Matheny

Date: 12/4/2008 11:11:00 AM

Hey I want your HONEST and TRUTHFUL thoughts on my four new poems. . . Please. . Thank You SOOOOOOOO Much. . . . . P.S. Sowwy for sayin that you were a meanie before, I now understand that you're just tryin to help me out. . . Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^

Julie Cottingham

Date: 12/3/2008 12:11:00 PM

Very clever as always, I like the wording, you choose them well. Julie

Ali Matheny

Date: 12/3/2008 11:44:00 AM

YOU SO MEAN, YOU MEANIE!!!!!! Love Not Your Friend Alexz Matheny >.<

Ali Matheny

Date: 12/3/2008 11:16:00 AM

Hey Goofy, You're not that smart, Cause you don't spell some words that great. . . JK. . . I love this poem cause it shows the real and true you, Inside and out. . . Love Your Friend Alexz Matheny ^.^ >.<

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/3/2008 3:20:00 AM

Full of mystery, i love it! every line stands on its own here, love it. love, Kristin

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 12/2/2008 7:53:00 PM

This is fascinating:) "chief among sinners"....great line. That can surely be used by me too..lol...so this is the true you!! Loved this all:) Always, Chitra

Laurie Ginn

Date: 12/2/2008 7:28:00 PM

Okay so you'd be at the top of the next guest list, lol. Great job. Laurie

P Sheart

Date: 12/2/2008 2:13:00 PM

Hi John LOL! Hey not to proud to admit your human "A", Love it. I think everyone here can relate to this one. At least we like to think so anyway!!! Great job. Thanks for your comments on my latest lyrics. I appreciate it. Hope you have a wonderful SAFE Holiday Season with those you love. Love Light Truth Patricia

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/2/2008 2:01:00 PM

Ah, character too complex to get into six words...LOL. Great write. I was stunned to see your poem start with 'harmonious' because I just used the same word in one of mine - I have a theory about words crying out to be used, but it would bore you to tears :) Thanks for your kind comments and continuous support. Love, Nigel

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/2/2008 1:45:00 PM

Aha! Now we got ya. Quite revealing, in a vague sort of way. : ) Deviously smart, huh. I wonder what that means? Interesting write! Love, Shar

Alina Vitali

Date: 12/2/2008 12:49:00 PM

Your decsription is vivid enough to get an almost complete image of a person, yet, laconic enough not to overhelm readers with words. Good work

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2008 12:43:00 PM

Like most of us....you are a very complex person, John!! Goodness knows...most people are a mixture of interesting elements...but not all are smart, or harmonious or create art!! Great self description! ...Carrie