This Dampened Day

~ A dampened morning calls my name as clouds engulf the sky Stepping in between the rain I watch the day go by Puddles catch reflections as a chilly wind does chase Shivers wrap me tightly in this winter’s cold embrace Yet still I’m feeling warm inside as this new day does start For love is like a summer sun aglow within my heart So as I wander on my way no matter what the view I’ll pay no mind, this dreary day and only think of you ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/13/2020 5:26:00 PM
Great thoughts... overcome all obstacles. Nice! Cheers, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2020 1:22:00 PM
Thanks so much GW. Don't know how I missed this comment but glad I saw it now.
Date: 1/13/2020 3:03:00 PM
Love knows no bounds and always warms the heart. This is lovely Chris. We have been having lots of rain and wind here too. Have a great day. xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much Connie. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 1/13/2020 1:01:00 PM
This is just what I needed on this dreary day. Thank you Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2020 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi
Date: 1/13/2020 9:58:00 AM
Nicely done Chris, a great way to look at a dreary day, love always makes things better, good morning!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thanks so much John
Date: 1/13/2020 9:41:00 AM
I love your last verse Chris, it wraps up this well crafted poem so beautifully! Blessing my friend, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much Jennifer.
Date: 1/13/2020 9:33:00 AM
sigh....so beautiful to have someone special enough to lift us from even the dreariest days just by thinking of them... wonderful poem Chris... good morning my friend... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2020 12:16:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. I am happy you liked this one. Good morning or afternoon now I suppose.
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