PERSONALLY SPEAKING Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Written on November 3, 2025 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Submerged in fiery red and golden blond My heart is burdened by whispers of wind Who write stories on my spirit, dismal Moments when I yield to the sun’s will Who will dress my fragile notes in wine And peace that never feels quite as great As the caress of each dream fading from night Who stifles my breath with soft moonlight
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