This Love

Oh my  love    
ever  dear  to   all  my  existence  
I    can   never  look  away  ,
from   the  man   you’ve  always  been    from  the   start 
even   when   times    may   change  on  us   from  time  to   time    I  will  love
and   lose    those   who  have  always   been   a  part  of  my  life
in  so  many  ways ;
You  keep  me  a  stronger woman  
in every single   way    I’ve  seen   you  in   the 
days   long  since  past   ah   but   even   prayers   go   sometimes  
unanswered  even  in   the   dreams   which  have   been   worth   nothing    more  than pain .
even    your name   
means  to   me   death  ah   but   please    spare  
me   the   pain    which     has    lost  all  purpose  in   this   life ,
I   will     never   look   away    from    the   
night’s   mysterious   aura    which   is 
now   shrouded  in   darkness   more so   than  another  time  
gone  long   ago ;
I   will   go  on   wishing   to  someday  
make  that   difference   which   no one  else  ever  could   
in   all   those   times    melding  into  me   so   long  ago   in   his  
caring     arms    smoothed   over  in  love   so  
astonishingly    beautiful   in  every   way   it  truly  is  
to  me   now .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/10/2016 1:10:00 AM
Rachel Brown, awesome to read this one again. linda
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Date: 8/25/2015 11:02:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:41:00 AM
Rachel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:35:00 AM
Rachel, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2015 1:27:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Rachel - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first well written and lovely poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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