Eric Boddie Poet Monorhyme

Thirty Rhymes, Triple Time

"Thirty Rhymes, Triple Time"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

I'm here for so much more than just lore
From the core, what we adore defines our chore
So I implore individuals to soar beyond open doors
Bypass the store, also the shore, even the gore
Pimps have whores, lions have roars, skin has pores
Rich equals poor, two squared, four, cuts leave sores
The groundhog bores, the shooter scores, the pitcher pours
Houses have floors, the seeker explores, prior comes before
Hunters seek moor, comedians use dor, fool equals boor
Boats use oars, evil, neither nor, God....no war

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Keith Bickerstaffe December 14, 2015 at 8:22 AM A very clever piece with cleverly sustained '...ore' rhyming. '...pimps have whores, lions have roars, skin has pores,' a fabulous piece! Best wishes, Keith Keith Bickerstaffe December 14, 2015 at 8:23 AM ...clearly a 7!

Alexis Y. December 4, 2015 at 8:57 AM WoW! Eric, I don't know how I missed this well written piece.It has a nice flow. This is a "rhyme time" masterpiece:-) Alexis 7 Eric Boddie December 4, 2015 at 9:10 AM thank you alexis....the funny thing is that I have never been truly satisfied with this one....for whatever reason it just needs something but I cant change it though....gotta keep moving forward....;)

Kim Van Breda December 3, 2015 at 4:44 PM Very clever fill in rhymes to go...~~X~~ Eric Boddie December 3, 2015 at 9:55 PM I did ignore those who tore my last encore....lol....I am glad you like it kim....I like your style....its so very unique....individualized....that's what I try to be....like odb there's no father to my style....lol

Constance La France December 1, 2015 at 7:47 PM Eric, I like the line "so I implore individuals to soar beyond open doors " ~ Eric Boddie December 3, 2015 at 9:50 PM thank you bw....as a fan of you I really appreciate it....;)

Anita Sharma November 24, 2015 at 10:10 AM Hunters seek moor, comedians use dor, fool equals boor Boats use oars, evil, neither nor, God....no war,,make every sense loving your writing eric Eric Boddie December 3, 2015 at 9:48 PM I Live for the mental challenge....lol....but thank you so much misha....;)

Eve Roper November 20, 2015 at 2:32 PM Soso... true, Eric, pass and ignore all the gore and wars. Eric Boddie December 3, 2015 at 9:43 PM we really need too eve....but the media wont allow it....but thank you as always....;)