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THIRTY MINUTE HUG

Up the stairs, You are there All around your smell bathes the room You and me really feel we care In instant spark and warmth booms Each minute counts important Each running second we all warmth Not anymore to make a nowhere haunt Rather to go somewhere stay be adamant I look stare direct to your eyes You do the same You hold your hind apart I did too and we fall to Hug No words came to our lips All we did is to swim in that hug Hug.. hug.. hug so tight.. so tight wanting not to depart.... by: olive_eloi 4:01pm 01/07/2014 --+++--+--------------

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Date: 11/24/2014 11:22:00 AM
30 minutes, now that's what I call a hug. I wish, hey ho! one day some day I'll be encapsulated in one. Love it Olive, James :)
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Date: 1/9/2014 6:12:00 PM
Very beautiful poem my friend on romance. Your soup friend Michael
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Date: 1/9/2014 11:52:00 AM
- A sweet and beautiful poem, Olive !! - Files good to read! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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