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Thinking of You

Sitting with someone, a warm, open fire. Someone else adds a fresh log or two. I watch sparks climbing fire's golden spire, more lovely when once I watched with you. Star-crusted sky, moon a silken sphere; tears fill my eyes...I wish you were here

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Debra L Brown

Date: 3/24/2022 4:17:00 PM

Lovely poem, somewhat sad as that special person wasn't there to share it with you. Well written. Blessing ~ Debra

Ann Peck
Date: 3/24/2022 4:52:00 PM

Thanks for commenting, Debra. Your beautiful poem about the beautiful butterfly inspired me.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/24/2022 2:22:00 PM

This is so delicate and wistful of memories of the one you miss, yes things are more lovely when you share them with your special somebody~

Ann Peck
Date: 3/25/2022 9:52:00 AM

Thanks, Michelle. My oldest son used to have bonfires, but he moved to the mountains--too many trees that might catch a spark.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/22/2022 10:57:00 AM

Splendid poem, Ann. I hear the voice of sweet memories.

Ann Peck
Date: 3/25/2022 9:47:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay. Yes, of long ago :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/22/2022 9:44:00 AM

A truly lovely, beautiful, touching poem! I can relate to these tender emotions. Thank you for reading my poem - your comments inspire me, and I feel honoured. BW ~ Mala

Ann Peck
Date: 3/24/2022 4:44:00 PM

Oh, Mala--You're so kind :) And yours inspire me. You have a beautiful heart. Thank you for your comments.

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 3/19/2022 5:29:00 PM

A beautiful and heartfelt poem Ann. Best wishes for the competition. Cheers my friend :-)

Ann Peck
Date: 3/21/2022 8:54:00 AM

Thanks, Anne. I think that when a love is lost, a friend fills its space :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2022 3:24:00 PM

wow, I really like this. I bet it can be a winner!!

Ann Peck
Date: 3/21/2022 8:56:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I love that you like it :)

Suzanne Clear

Date: 3/19/2022 10:47:00 AM

Oh Anne, now the tears stream down my face.........so many memories... must be reasons God gave us tears dear heart, suzanne

Ann Peck
Date: 3/21/2022 8:52:00 AM

I'm glad it touched you, dear Suzanne.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/19/2022 9:24:00 AM

awww, lovely but so sad

Ann Peck
Date: 3/21/2022 8:49:00 AM

Thanks, Jack :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/17/2022 8:02:00 PM

Longing for a lost love, Beautiful write Ann, Winning wishes

Ann Peck
Date: 3/18/2022 10:10:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph, for your kind comments. Yes, longing for my husband--or a lost love from youth :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/16/2022 12:22:00 PM

Enjoyed (it describes my daughter missing her mother) Aloha!

Ann Peck
Date: 3/18/2022 10:07:00 AM

I'm sorry she lost her mother. I lost mine, too, when I was two. It's hard.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 3/16/2022 2:53:00 AM

Reading this takes me to where I always longed to be - in the garden of my home with my lovely aunt <3 Poetry can take you anywhere. Thanks for gifting this beautiful feeling!!

Ann Peck
Date: 3/18/2022 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Swetha, for your lovely comments. I think you're referring to my garden poem. I have done the same thing. :)