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3/6/2025 for Ekphrasis on Album Cover Art Poetry Contest sponsored by Di11y Da11y

Thinking about Fair Warning

Is there a word for when you love something because it is horrible
and it's horrible because it's true,
and specifically, because it's you?

That's why my chosen album cover
adorns, probably, a fine record,
but not one I have special feeling about, 
instead of a great psychedelic cover
from the great psychedelic musical era -
or a cover like that of HMS Donovan,
featuring children's poems put to music
(listen to The Walrus and The Carpenter).

Imagine my surprise, when, grown up, I saw
portions of The Maze, by William Kurelek,
on the cover of Fair Warning, a Van Halen album.
A flashback to being ten,
reading the Time-Life book on psychology
about madness in art.

The cover shows a few of the best scenes -
the boy being beat up
while classmates cruelly feast on the spectacle,
the boy, his progress thwarted
by a brick wall.
These are scenes from The Maze,
self-images
in a painting of the inside of the artist's skull.

We see his memories -
a curled-up rat, dead,
an older boy looking a his own arm,
devoid of flesh,
as if it were not his own,
as death lurked
curiously close by,
a helpless lizard
being attacked by
a murder
of crows,
and my favorite,
right on top,
the boy,
alone and dejected,
in a wheat field -

thrilling,
shocking,
lonely,
to see,
in an artist's work,
oneself.
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Conn Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 5:53 PM
Just imagine the hilarity if Alex and Eddies last name was Van Dalen?
Conn Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:40 PM
I’m led to believe you missed the hilarity.
Crandall Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:41 PM
You (and Google) just caused me to become aware of the artists Jan van Dalen and Anton van Dalen. It could be the art and music world are more deeply connected than I understood. What if Alex and Eddy were called Jan and Dean?
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