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Things Will Be Better

I stood in the snow frozen park Leaned against a tree, not feeling too well Beneath skies filled with gray clouds I looked between the birch trees And I saw the birds flying I heard them singing in the stillness Then I closed my eyes and imagined, Their happy chirping songs were for me And in this moment, everything was ok As I returned, I saw what autumn left behind Pinecones, leaves and acorns frozen in ice I saw a boat parked in a yard nearby As my mind thought about summer again Then, everything will be better too Heidi Sands 1/14/20

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Arturo Michael

Date: 1/16/2020 10:40:00 AM

You placed yourself right into the poem...an experience revealed..." things will be better" Happy 2020 to you

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2020 2:50:00 PM

Hi Arturo. Nice to see you and thank you. Happy 2020 :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/15/2020 7:45:00 AM

Nice imagery of winter, Heidi, enjoyed reading I hope you stay warm. Hugs Eve

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2020 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Eve. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a nice day :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 5:49:00 AM

Ah yes, summer...wonderful, hopeful pen that reads rather smoothly; flows along very well.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2020 6:34:00 AM

Thank you. I am grateful for your comments M.L. :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/15/2020 12:45:00 AM

Woww awesome for me this is exotic wonderland you picture, which we never get to see so you painted it for us marvellously for us in the scorching lands. We wish for winter snow while you want summer eh. I admired how you mentioned of birds and trees. Kudos!!! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2020 6:33:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/14/2020 5:42:00 PM

Lately, you've been writing such lovely verses, dear Heidi...your writing skills have reached another level...I'm so proud...a fav for me dear friend...beautifully done...^WW^ :o)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2020 6:32:00 PM

That is strange for me to hear, because I thought they are worse. Many are rushed lately, etc and much going on. Thank you so much WW. I appreciate the FAV too :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/14/2020 3:20:00 PM

There is always cheer to be found from animals who brave the cold. Winter is beautiful but the harshest season for many. Very nice Heidi. xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2020 4:10:00 PM

Yes, it is. They were having a nice time today ! Thank you Connie :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2020 1:01:00 PM

The winter birds are reminders that other flocks will fill the skies come spring. (Two herons were parading down my street yesterday:) Winter is hard for a lot of people, so spring is celebrated enthusiastically. Hope your area warms up, Heidi. Enjoyed your descriptive verse! Hugs, Carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2020 4:10:00 PM

That is nice to see the herons like you did Carolyn. We are actually in a mild temperature spell right now, but still with ice and snow. Although a lot of 'gray'. I appreciate your visit and kind comment! hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/14/2020 8:36:00 AM

Everyday is a new challenge and when one of those days turns out to be less than we expected...there is always tomorrow. Things always seem to get better Heidi. Loved your poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2020 9:13:00 AM

You are right Chris. Everyday is a new challenge and things do get better. Thank you for your visit. I am happy you liked it :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/14/2020 8:04:00 AM

Beautifully written poem dearest. Heidi! Wise it is to accept each season for what it is and enjoy whatever it offers. We must not forget that winder makes summer so desirable! Excellent imagery my friend!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2020 9:12:00 AM

Thank you very much Demetrios :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2020 8:00:00 AM

Exquisite imagery in this write, Heidi. Almost like I am seeing the sights and hearing the sounds in your words--in the stillness you felt.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2020 9:12:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I just described it as it was. my muse is a bit off, so it is nice that it still reaches people. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2020 7:56:00 AM

When your mind thinks about summer, you naturally feel even happier and the chirping songs seem to get more delightful. Thank you for this poem which made me smile.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2020 9:11:00 AM

Thank you for your comment Caren. and you are welcome too. It is amazing what the chirping songs of the birds can do! :)