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Thin Screened Nature - a Compression Poem

Thin screened nature
                                             Unable to grasp
                                       Splendiferous structure.
                                             Feel the humility
                                             Glory of the God
                                              Bursts forever


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                                     28th Sept'2013

                                     Dr. Ram Mehta
                                     
                                      7th place win in

                                     Contest: Compression poem by nette onclaud

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/13/2013 8:09:00 AM

Well done Dr. Ram!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2013 8:29:00 PM

Dr Ram, ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/9/2013 10:00:00 AM

Dr Ram, congrats on your winning poem! Just wonderful!! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 8:23:00 PM

Dr Ram .......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2013 5:32:00 AM

Expressive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2013 1:32:00 AM

this one is very well done.Dr. Ram. Love it. and congrats for your win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/5/2013 10:33:00 PM

Very nice . congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/5/2013 10:33:00 AM

So much said, in so few words. What a wonderful compression of poem! Congratulations!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/5/2013 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Dr.Mehta.

Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi

Date: 9/28/2013 3:08:00 PM

Dr mehta, this is a good write. Thanks for stopping by on my page....

Kash Poet

Date: 9/28/2013 1:14:00 PM

Very nice Dr.Mehta.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes for Nette's contest. I am fine.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2013 8:36:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/28/2013 6:21:00 AM

This is a wonderful entry into Nette's contest, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a delightful piece, quite the glorious poem, Great Work!!