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Thief In the Night

unannounced rob you blind let her come a thief in the night in one final peaceful breath lingering dignity in the balance death not being the worst of fate AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on May 15, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 2, MAY 2019 LIND68868 sponsored by DEAR HEART

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Date: 5/16/2019 9:51:00 PM
Well penned Panagiota
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Date: 5/16/2019 10:54:00 PM
Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/15/2019 10:10:00 PM
'let her come a thief in the night' -- Line's best line, maybe ever?! Wow. So profound. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 5/15/2019 10:25:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 5/15/2019 9:41:00 PM
Great poem and I pray the family is not sleeping when the visitor comes
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Date: 5/15/2019 10:25:00 PM
Maybe we'll be ready for her!
Date: 5/15/2019 3:03:00 PM
An engaging bit of a terse, befits a contest, best wishes, Aloha wk
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Date: 5/15/2019 3:05:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, William.
Date: 5/15/2019 11:23:00 AM
This is pronouncedly profound, Line.
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Date: 5/15/2019 3:05:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/15/2019 9:53:00 AM
Woah, that hits square on the chest. Exemplary impacting piece Line, a winner for me! Good luck in the contest <3 xomo
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Date: 5/15/2019 3:06:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit compliment, Maureen.

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