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They'll be no hop scotch

They'll be no hop scotch with a broken crotch. No gyrating like Elvis with a fractured pelvis.. Don't plan on doing the hoot Chie cootch. Better settle for a smooch. No leisurely long car rides, not until the pain subsides.. If you are planning to stand, better keep pains meds. at hand. Just want to sit a bit? It's painful until the bones knit.. Our pelvis supports our bodies weight, if fractured one must rest and wait. Two legs are less efficient then four, if there's life after life, I will need two more..

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Date: 5/5/2024 10:07:00 PM
This is so clever. Gosh, did you break your pelvis?
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 5/6/2024 3:55:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Seven weeks this friday, I fell in a hole with broken asphalt at a near by mall and fractured three tiny pelvis bones. It's a big OUCh. Don't do this ever!! Thanks for your comment dear and wishing you well always..
Date: 5/5/2024 11:55:00 AM
Sorry for your fall. I hadn't realized this was a recent event that occurred to you
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 5/6/2024 3:57:00 AM
Hi Hilda, I am sorry if this offended you as it was a vague attempt at humor by a female who sustained a recent fall. I am a female though for sure..

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